Monday, June 8, 2009

# A Communication Gap Comments

Rating: 4.8
In todays technological uptrend
we have the world within our hand
a network could take us all around


Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
Duh Huh 22 June 2009
Thought provoking poem. If the conscience is strong enough it can also be a guiding beacon. Very well done. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Maitreyee Joshi 20 June 2009
the truth about todays world.true, i like it.thanks10
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Miriam Maia Padua 13 June 2009
mindful, heartfelt write... sends us a great meaning... with truth on the reality of our feelings of ourselves... a piece to make us reflect... thanks for sharing your beautiful insights... _maia_
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rago rago 10 June 2009
a communication gap is the worst of all which make the egoist senses on us to play....... we fall and never raise our heads....... your poem certainly brought a meaning.........
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Fay Slimm 10 June 2009
This verse has seeds of truth which I heartedly endorse....... the mind has to be controlled then we are the master and the heart can become itself - -we often get this gap between, - - which you aptly wrote about...... thank you 10/10 from Fay.
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Louis Rams 09 June 2009
the heart and mind coincide but the conscience is the ruler
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Catrina Heart 09 June 2009
soul rules the heart fear rules the mind conscience is the real communicator ---- well said and penned rightfully...communication gap when one doesn't want to listen but hear the words beeing said/uttered...............10
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Lynda Robson 09 June 2009
There is no limit to the minds thoughts, good write, 10 Lynda xx
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Carol Gall 09 June 2009
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Ency Bearis 09 June 2009
amusing write......consequential....
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Sandra Martyres 08 June 2009
Nice write Samanyan...on an interesting subject..
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Joseph Poewhit 08 June 2009
Sort of like a shield or a sterile communications. No real human contact.
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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 June 2009
'soul rules the heart fear rules the mind' Truly expressed: there is gap- heart and mind. A nice poem composed on mind's eye.
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