Wednesday, March 7, 2007

A Day For.... Comments

Rating: 3.5
An unsewn day rises from yesterdays dust
it's a new day to darn
a choice of many colors
Empty canvas


Howard Johnson
Chitra - 29 November 2008
uplifting in tone urging us to paint rainbow hues to etch a brilliant life
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Thanks Howard. Your poem is simply excellent. It really blessed me.
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Tia Maria 30 October 2008
To be given a gift such as yours, can you hear all the readers applause? There is not much more that I can say, other than you inspired me to paint love today :) 10,000,000/10
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Adeline Foster 14 October 2008
This is lovely, such great thoughts, so well expressed. As a grammar teacher, I itch to proof read the typos. Even so, the thoughts come across so lovely. Adeline
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Fiona Davidson 14 October 2008
Kept me reading to the end...brilliant use of much feeling in this poem Howard...loved it....
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Chantal Lammerts 09 April 2008
great, totally loved it! easy to read and still incredibly written. what would love look like? maybe something to think about next time for me, thank you very much for this lovely poem.
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Margaret Alice 09 April 2008
'What would love look like? ' I think it looks like a beaming smile and a radiant eye and romping in freedom and brilliant sunshine and blushing cheeks and the sweetest music written in notes on a sheet and crystals and bubbles in diamond hues and everything else you mentioned too! Beauty and harmony personified... Warmest regards, Margaret Alice.
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Virginie Guillemette 06 March 2008
Howard, I feel optimistic reading this poem. I suppose we can all paint our days as we please. It's good to be reminded. lovely.
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Original Unknown Girl 18 February 2008
Wow... this is a stunning piece of work. How brilliant! HG: -) xx
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S LL 08 February 2008
'What would love look like? ' Doesn't that say it all.
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Patrice James 07 February 2008
wow, Howard this is very beautiful master piece of yours, I truly enjoy reading it..and its very well penned.
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I really enjoyed the beginning of this poem. It painted a picture of a life full of possibilities, a life where hope has meaning. Thank you for allowing me to read this well-written poem. Peace, L&T
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Shannon Wright 08 January 2008
howard, another 10. this is beautiful. -shannon
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Rebecca Pring 26 March 2007
Wow, that was incredible. The metaphors were used impressivly and they make this poem viewable to the reader. Excellent work! ! !
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Mary Nagy 17 March 2007
I love the thought of wondering what is in another's heart as they look up at the sky, sunset, etc. Very lovely, thoughtful poem Howard. :) Have a great day! Sincerely, Mary
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Lola Cunningham 16 March 2007
Howard, a wonderful marriage of word and thought! A ten for this well thought out poem.
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Sue Ann Simar 13 March 2007
A day for sweetness...I especially like 'lace with its many holes' and 'twisted clouds with weightless flab'.
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Duncan Wyllie 09 March 2007
A beautiful poem of colour, very well presented, Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X
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wow that was really good i am have a lot of talent...keep me posted. <3saisha<3
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Jibin Joseph 08 March 2007
excellent poem........loved captured.........thanks for sharing peace jibin
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