A Day With The Lord - Poem by Indira Renganathan

Vital, vigorous, fervent He's the cosmic force/Blest or blazed all from His source.....the expression finds a divine touch! A great poem dear madam! I love to read your beautiful works again and again! (Report)Reply

Watch the merry Lord ecstatic, samsaric
Performing to the core of our blood rhythmic
Reddened to be Ratnasabapathy dynamic
Refreshed of yet more ablution fantastic
On Thiruvonam in Chithirai bombastic


great write
great expression
great 10++++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

A real poem.I found it very interesting, English is not my mother tongue though. A very different poem. (Report)Reply

....Vital, vigorous, fervent He's the cosmic force
Blest or blazed all from His source..................While embracing these pious few words, I wish you and your beloved family a happy, prosperous and eventful new year 2019! (Report)Reply

Wake up o'Lord, it's winter's vernal shine
Dawning to be consecrated with mercy Thine
Whilst yet a darkling sky's in full moon shine- - - - - - - - Very nice presentation- - Standard composition (Report)Reply

A great poem! I derive immense pleasure reading this sublime piece of poetry time and again! (Report)Reply

great piece and great work - excellent

Unto Him retires our woes and wishes
Unto Him Poornima wanes, waxes, wanes (Report)Reply

Namashkar, your poem is so full f wisdom and it thrills me to read about Shiva too. It seem to tell everything that there s in Hindu culture, those names and expressions are so full of beauty.i am happy I read it. God bless you
Mohabeer Beeharry (Report)Reply

Extraordinary poem by any yardstick. Be it the temple rituals to appease The Lord from morning till night or their co-relation with phases of the moon or retaining the poetic beauty through out the exercise, you have done it marvelously. Thanks a lot, Mdm Indira. (Report)Reply

I feel so excited as I have this journey through this creative garden of yours revered Ma'am,
Thanks a lot for the sharing.
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A sublime piece of poetry! My great pleasure reading it time and again! (Report)Reply

It is a prayer to wake up God. (Report)Reply

A tremendous beautiful thoughts have been embodied in this marvelous poem. Beautiful verses have pulled me through towards the end of the write. A high spirited write invoking His.power and a deep affirmation of faith in the Lord.. Beautifully crafted write, Indira. Thank you for sharing.10 (Report)Reply

A fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Writing for the edification and glorification of God Almighty is the hallmark of ingenuity. Thanks for sharing Indira and do remain enriched. (Report)Reply

I get a lot of peace when I read this poem! A pious piece, meticulous and immaculately structured! Thanks dear madam! Pray God bless you always! (Report)Reply

A sublime creation..! The vibrant description of Lord Shiva is pulsating..A great poem! (Report)Reply

Beautifully composed, a divine piece. Thank you for sharing this poem. Take care (Report)Reply

Indira Renganathan(11/3/2017 12:56:00 AM)

Very happy to read your comment Seema...thank you very much

Shiva(God, you may give any good name to Hin) is all content with the whole cosmic force
Unto Him retires our woes and wishes
Unto Him Poornima wanes, waxes, wanes
A beautiful thought, a great spiritual poem. (Report)Reply

Indira Renganathan(9/24/2017 1:16:00 AM)

Thank you Akhtar...I'm really happy that you visited my page again with this kind comment...thanks and God bless you

It is a marvellous spiritual poem with nice penmanship. Let Shiva bless all. The ending of the poem is very heart touching.
Shiva is all content with the whole cosmic force
Unto Him retires our woes and wishes
Unto Him Poornima wanes, waxes, wanes..
Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

Indira Renganathan(8/11/2017 11:09:00 AM)

Thanks a lot for this nice comment Kumar...God bless you

Wake up o'Lord, it's winter's vernal shine
Dawning to be consecrated with mercy Thine
Whilst yet a darkling sky's in full moon shine
In tardy treads it's pinking too fine
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Unto Him retires our woes and wishes
Unto Him Poornima wanes, waxes, wanes
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Your knowledge and depth in Sanskrit and Hindu religious scriptures just awe inspiring.I am too short of words to praise this great poem. (Report)Reply

Indira Renganathan(4/3/2017 5:17:00 AM)

Thank you Bharati..God bless you