Tuesday, June 17, 2008

A Day With The Lord Comments

Rating: 5.0
Wake up o'Lord, it's winter's vernal shine
Dawning to be consecrated with mercy Thine
Whilst yet a darkling sky's in full moon shine
In tardy treads it's pinking too fine

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Indira Renganathan
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 28 October 2020
It's a sublime piece of poetry! My great pleasure reading this spiritual write time and again dear madam. Stay always happy and blessed.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 September 2020
Vital, vigorous, fervent He's the cosmic force Blest or blazed all from His source Fiery that He seeks more a bathing course Cool on Maasi- morn of a chathurdasi-repose Ere full moon....thrilling expression with wonderful imagery. A marvelous poem is amazingly delineated. Thank you madam. Five stars.
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Santhakumary Pr 25 January 2020
What a magnificent poem! " Shiva is all content with the whole cosmic force Unto Him retires our woes and wishes" Thank you, madam, for sharing such a great poem.
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Magadha Rani 16 December 2019
A great poem dear mam....appreciated it. thank you for sharing....10+++++++
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2019
This is a great poem dear madam! I derive aesthetic pleasure in reading this magnificent piece of poetry time and again!
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Mamunur Rahman Kayes 13 November 2019
Now time for the slumber-surrender-darkness Nescient night whilst seeking refuge vivacious The Lord forbids its ignorance gracious...very Excellent verse
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 August 2019
Vital, vigorous, fervent He's the cosmic force/Blest or blazed all from His source.....the expression finds a divine touch! A great poem dear madam! I love to read your beautiful works again and again!
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Adeeb Alfateh 29 July 2019
Watch the merry Lord ecstatic, samsaric Performing to the core of our blood rhythmic Reddened to be Ratnasabapathy dynamic Refreshed of yet more ablution fantastic On Thiruvonam in Chithirai bombastic great write great expression great 10++++++++++++++
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Hassan Hayati 08 May 2019
A real poem.I found it very interesting, English is not my mother tongue though. A very different poem.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2018
....Vital, vigorous, fervent He's the cosmic force Blest or blazed all from His source..................While embracing these pious few words, I wish you and your beloved family a happy, prosperous and eventful new year 2019!
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Israj Ali 12 December 2018
Wake up o'Lord, it's winter's vernal shine Dawning to be consecrated with mercy Thine Whilst yet a darkling sky's in full moon shine- - - - - - - - Very nice presentation- - Standard composition
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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2018
A great poem! I derive immense pleasure reading this sublime piece of poetry time and again!
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Mahtab Bangalee 23 October 2018
great piece and great work - excellent Unto Him retires our woes and wishes Unto Him Poornima wanes, waxes, wanes
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Mohabeer Beeharry 22 August 2018
Namashkar, your poem is so full f wisdom and it thrills me to read about Shiva too. It seem to tell everything that there s in Hindu culture, those names and expressions are so full of beauty.i am happy I read it. God bless you Mohabeer Beeharry
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Rajnish Manga 06 August 2018
Extraordinary poem by any yardstick. Be it the temple rituals to appease The Lord from morning till night or their co-relation with phases of the moon or retaining the poetic beauty through out the exercise, you have done it marvelously. Thanks a lot, Mdm Indira.
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 06 August 2018
I feel so excited as I have this journey through this creative garden of yours revered Ma'am, Thanks a lot for the sharing. 10++++
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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2018
A sublime piece of poetry! My great pleasure reading it time and again!
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It is a prayer to wake up God.
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A tremendous beautiful thoughts have been embodied in this marvelous poem. Beautiful verses have pulled me through towards the end of the write. A high spirited write invoking His.power and a deep affirmation of faith in the Lord.. Beautifully crafted write, Indira. Thank you for sharing.10
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Chinedu Dike 08 March 2018
A fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Writing for the edification and glorification of God Almighty is the hallmark of ingenuity. Thanks for sharing Indira and do remain enriched.
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