Wake up o'Lord, it's winter's vernal shine
Dawning to be consecrated with mercy Thine
Whilst yet a darkling sky's in full moon shine
In tardy treads it's pinking too fine
Vital, vigorous, fervent He's the cosmic force
Blest or blazed all from His source
Fiery that He seeks more a bathing course
Cool on Maasi- morn of a chathurdasi-repose
Ere full moon....thrilling expression with wonderful imagery. A marvelous poem is amazingly delineated. Thank you madam. Five stars.
What a magnificent poem!
" Shiva is all content with the whole cosmic force
Unto Him retires our woes and wishes"
Thank you, madam, for sharing such a great poem.
Now time for the slumber-surrender-darkness
Nescient night whilst seeking refuge vivacious
The Lord forbids its ignorance gracious...very Excellent verse
Vital, vigorous, fervent He's the cosmic force/Blest or blazed all from His source.....the expression finds a divine touch! A great poem dear madam! I love to read your beautiful works again and again!
Watch the merry Lord ecstatic, samsaric
Performing to the core of our blood rhythmic
Reddened to be Ratnasabapathy dynamic
Refreshed of yet more ablution fantastic
On Thiruvonam in Chithirai bombastic
great write
great expression
great 10++++++++++++++
....Vital, vigorous, fervent He's the cosmic force
Blest or blazed all from His source..................While embracing these pious few words, I wish you and your beloved family a happy, prosperous and eventful new year 2019!
Wake up o'Lord, it's winter's vernal shine
Dawning to be consecrated with mercy Thine
Whilst yet a darkling sky's in full moon shine- - - - - - - - Very nice presentation- - Standard composition
Namashkar, your poem is so full f wisdom and it thrills me to read about Shiva too. It seem to tell everything that there s in Hindu culture, those names and expressions are so full of beauty.i am happy I read it. God bless you
Mohabeer Beeharry
Extraordinary poem by any yardstick. Be it the temple rituals to appease The Lord from morning till night or their co-relation with phases of the moon or retaining the poetic beauty through out the exercise, you have done it marvelously. Thanks a lot, Mdm Indira.
A tremendous beautiful thoughts have been embodied in this marvelous poem. Beautiful verses have pulled me through towards the end of the write. A high spirited write invoking His.power and a deep affirmation of faith in the Lord.. Beautifully crafted write, Indira. Thank you for sharing.10
A fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Writing for the edification and glorification of God Almighty is the hallmark of ingenuity. Thanks for sharing Indira and do remain enriched.
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