'You won't be led to hell! '
'Well? Are you sure about it? '
Eyes widening she asked
I nodded in the affirmative
She moved a bit closer-
Hugged my arms
'How sweet of you to say that!
Heaven indeed! '
I kept smiling
Watching her eyes try
To transcend distances
A new hell, perhaps, could be
On the build
Until then she is safe
I am not going to make a hell
Out of the present moment
Let her travel, in her dreams
And let me remain
In my peace, here
wonderful Kesav truly a masterpiece
Lovely write.....thanks for sharing.....
'Let her travel in her dreams And let me remain In my peace here'--Giving someone hope is great thing.A beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.
His promise and her dream...reality only knows what it is going to be...very interestingly crafted poem
Two contract nicely mend....Let her travel in her dreams And let me remain In my peace here
Heaven or Hell, it is right here, on this very Earth. Don't be swayed by promises otherwise. Good one, Venkat.5*
We could never sway a mind fixed with a different dream.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poetic expressions. A poem of great depth and thought provoking. Masterly crafted.