john tiong chunghoo

Gold Star - 5,676 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

A Dream Within A Dream - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

as i close my eyes
a blackhole looms
this inner world
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  • (5/31/2007 11:49:00 PM)

    How true! The Buddha says all is just an illusion. Everything around us is characterized by dependent origination. Only that which has no beginning and no end qualifies as Truth as Truth has no beginning and no end. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/3/2006 8:23:00 AM)

    Fantastic piece! Well versed (Report)Reply

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  • (5/31/2005 11:18:00 AM)

    John, this poem rambles. It is not tight like some of your shorter poems. Again, I would not give my inspiration. The reader tends to focus on the original poet rather than your work. I would love to see you rework this poem as I like the idea of a dream within a dream. I write so many dream poems.

    Raynette
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