Saturday, January 24, 2009

A Enemy / A Friend. Comments

Rating: 4.3

a enemy will always snitch,
a friend likes you wether your poor or rich,
a enemy won't help you in a fight,
a friend is there wether you're wrong or right,

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JOSE MURGUIA
COMMENTS
Surabhi Panda 09 August 2014

This is the real fact you have written. i like it.

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Ben Gieske 28 September 2009

Nicely done. So many reasons to appreciate our friends and how to be a friend.

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* Naphright * 23 September 2009

ausome dude, i look forward to reading the rest of your poems

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I$land Gurl 08 September 2009

I also agree with 'paige scott'.. But i really like this poem..

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warner treuter 22 August 2009

I see you're not rich, You have friends you can trust. Me, too.

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Winnie Angel 11 August 2009

Much true but friends are more at power to hurt! coz we love them.....Whatever an enemy says never hurt us but a friend in a slightest comment on you! it can be deadly!

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lisa moore 11 August 2009

i agree with 'paige scott' it would go better if you used an instead of a.. but other than that brilliant! luv lisa xo : -)

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Paige S 06 April 2009

It wasn't bad! Pretty nice. But I do think that it would flow better if you used one grammar rule and wrote ' an enemy' rather than 'a enemy.'

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Sade Blue 07 February 2009

its so true, I know i need more friends in my life, good work!

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Eldon M Thomas 03 February 2009

your poem speaks the truth Jose. Keep up the good work. If you haven't done so already you should write one about the friends that make you not need enemies, if you catch my drift!

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L.P. Alexanders 03 February 2009

very true, I loved it! Excellent juxtaposition and rhyme as well keep writing fella

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Myrtle Thomas 31 January 2009

A lot of wisdom in a list of life lesson from someone so young, seems you have a good head on your shoulders.Don'T ever stop writing.A very good job.

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Junior Pocoloco 31 January 2009

I like this poem, you bring up a lot of good points. We are lucky that friendship is possible in this existence and lucky that there are enemies we can learn from. They both show us where we are weak and where we are strong, bless them both.

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Rachel Hankins 30 January 2009

This poems give me hope that not everybody in the worlds out to get you

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Kite Remedy 30 January 2009

yes, a true condition, a great write from you..

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Hugo Sanchez 27 January 2009

lovely it sounds great.nice writing

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Inner Whispers 25 January 2009

a friend can say...'sarap mo'ng tadyakan..' when you are wrong, ha ha! Good one!

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Bri Perreira 24 January 2009

This is all so very true! I Like it!

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