A Fish In The Sea Of Tears Poem by Asif Andalib

A Fish In The Sea Of Tears

Rating: 4.1


O baby you have made me insult-proof
Though if you are a home I am your roof!

Now you can insult me as much as you wish
I live in the sea of tears as if a fish!

Now you can forget me but I will love you always
I will do my level best to see smile on your face!

Now you can avoid me if I come closer
It doesn’t matter if I become loser!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 11 October 2011

it has a catchy title...and living like a fish in sea of tears...i bow to ur imagination!

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Unwritten Soul 29 September 2011

Sweet sea you live in, right? ? ? that's how you make this sound so nice! ...Sea so sweet in your mind, because of that you sometimes taste salty tears more...coz u used to live in sweet world..In other word, even you feel low but you keep your day high...guess you really fall in love :) _Unwritten SOul

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Micmac Mccrory 07 February 2012

love the title; a good write.

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ishant Bhurani 13 February 2012

Really, well written...

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 September 2012

Written well with flair......khub bhalo laglo pore

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2013

Excellent rhyming poem! Enjoyd readin. Do read my latest too.

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Vishal Sharma 03 July 2013

a very lovely and innocent poem

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Rishi Kaashyap 22 December 2012

Love the message it conveys... Keep Writing :)

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Roong S 28 October 2012

wow..can't imagine anyone so sweet ;)

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Sarojini Pattayat 14 October 2012

nice poem. what made you to write this poem.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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