Shalini Samuel

Rookie - 27 Points (Kanniyakumari)

A Fishy Day At Bay - Poem by Shalini Samuel

Blue wave, white foam, washing the long shore
with its tender soothing hands, brushing away
my fading memories, polishing men's rock heart, at bay
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Comments about A Fishy Day At Bay by Shalini Samuel

  • Hans Vr (1/24/2014 8:35:00 PM)

    A pleasure to read. Nice (Report) Reply

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  • (1/8/2014 4:50:00 AM)

    a very creative and beautiful poem...loved it. (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2013 11:50:00 AM)

    Strange piece here. I like it. The style, creativity and flow works. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (11/5/2013 7:41:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Puts me on sea for a morning walk. Loved it. congratulations. (Report) Reply

  • (10/27/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    great sonnet loved it (Report) Reply

  • Williams George (10/26/2013 9:35:00 AM)

    sinking legs, wander aimlessly across the shore, holding hand
    sometimes alone, like two creepers intertwined, joy and sorrow guise
    the breaking dawn, sun rises, to the silent command of magic wand
    I look upon through the net, the arid faces, ripping hungry and fiery eyes..

    Excellent write. Beautiful picture scape, Congrats on your win, Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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  • Williams George (10/26/2013 9:33:00 AM)

    Dear Shalini,
    Excellent write, Congrats
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  • (10/25/2013 10:41:00 PM)

    Vivid imagery makes the poem come alive! However, I would have loved it still more had the rhythm of the first three stanzas been maintained in the last two. The first stanza promised much more! ! A talented poet, who can only mature with the passage of goode olde wine.... (Report) Reply

  • (10/25/2013 12:14:00 PM)

    Lovely metaphoric play! (Report) Reply

  • (10/25/2013 8:18:00 AM)

    Really great. Keep it up: -) (Report) Reply

  • (10/25/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    There is Solitude,
    There is Nostalgia,
    There is the right mix of Subtlety and flow of life..

    The initial stanza brings in certain feeling akin to that of admiring a Water Color painting...
    The poem travels through various stages of creative narration and creative imagination..
    and the last one..
    the last one blazes into reality.

    It was a soothing experience reading through... All the very best.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/22/2013 11:08:00 PM)

    caught in men's glitters of a wonder world afar, lovely lines...10 (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/22/2013 11:07:00 PM)

    caught in men's glitters of a wonder world afar.. lovely lines....10 (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (10/20/2013 5:52:00 PM)

    Aa nice day dream, wll penned (Report) Reply

  • (10/19/2013 10:37:00 AM)

    very creative akka...... (Report) Reply

  • (10/19/2013 8:40:00 AM)

    nice.........i like it................ :) (Report) Reply

  • Tribhawan Kaul (10/18/2013 1:31:00 PM)

    imagery is beautiful. Lovely poem 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (10/17/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    Your day dream is very nice and tuching heart. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/17/2013 9:05:00 AM)

    travelling back alive- just a daydream... nice lines, , lovely feelong...10

    The life stands as vast spread ocean
    It presents with blue water scene
    So deep yet presents with dilemma
    Person fails to think as if in comma
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  • (10/17/2013 8:35:00 AM)

    Fantastic shalini, It is very deep.feelings. (Report) Reply

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