A 'Girl' And Now Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

A 'Girl' And Now

Rating: 4.6


Lost Girl and Now in the woods,
and that which you hug is the tree.
You can not stretch them, Full around it,
while upward and down ward amazed.
And your feet become even more entangled
under it's skirt,
as it's roots are at play with your lovely toes.






e.p.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 December 2009

Wonderful metaphor….’ it's roots play with your long toes….’ Wow! 10 MS. NIVEDITA UK

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guy------- you write well. :)

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Maria Shipka 04 December 2009

Yes! It is not about what you write! It is not about what I read... it is about what is evokate in my mind :) Thank you for sharing! + 10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 11 December 2009

stimulating to think.10

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Halana Williams 09 December 2009

ok.....so the meaning of your poem is? i mean dont get me wrong your words were nice but i just couldn't see your vision.

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Seema Chowdhury 09 December 2009

very nice and meaningful poem. thanks for sharing your poem. take care

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Sherri Coulter 08 December 2009

lovely play from your lips, iip, as I usually read -10

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Tai Chi Italy 07 December 2009

Sleepy Hollow springs to mind here iip! The final lines imagery is a bit scarey, but comforting too. Smiling at you Tai

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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