Wednesday, August 9, 2006

A Gothic Suicide Comments

Rating: 4.8
Felt all that was within, the dread and lonely pain
Fore seeing all the grey clouds, and endless rain
In an entrapment of her bleak, bedroom place
Many scratches of finger nails, adorned her face


Vision Ghost
Phael 03 February 2018
Exceptional work.
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i love this poem the best dark poem i have read so far very good
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so real i could feel all her pain and see her blood it touched me i dont write profesionally yet but read this depression and let me know from a pros point what its like
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Anita Blake 28 July 2007
amazing write.this piece really touchd me in many ways. i so understand the pain writen beneath these lines.
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Cris K 03 January 2007
I almost started crying when I read this poem. The most influencial poem I have read yet! I love it, I love it, I love it. I didn't think is was possibly to stimulate such emotions through words but you are an expert at doing this. Please keep writing. I will be reading your work for sure, for many years to come. -C.Candea
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T.k Owens 18 September 2006
That was creepy...but intense with such a reality as of to daily life. I can see her as I read the poem over in my mind...she has some deep pain that runs like the harsh waters of the ocean, which never seems to stop. I really like this gives me coldchills.
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Courtney Chapman 01 September 2006
it's very real i could see her... i could see her blood
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