Friday, December 17, 2004

A Grieving Mother Comments

Rating: 4.9

Now - our home is extremely lonesome
Since my son went away.
Although the sun is shining,
The sky seems dull and gray.

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Joseph T. Renaldi
COMMENTS
Ernestine Northover 22 September 2005

I feel so sad for you if this is a true story. It's a beautifully written poem and very moving. Thank you. Sincerely Ernestine Northover

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Kelly Allen Vinal 18 December 2004

Well formatted, with an excellent ending.

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