Saturday, December 30, 2006

A Journey To Eternity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time is to take a jerky turn,
I blinkingly moved away,
The end is flawless,
Nostalgias awakened;

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Uzma Jamil
COMMENTS
Sudipta Bhattacharyya 14 January 2016

Bodies surrender, soul active , wonderful truth steeped with high spirituality. Too nice a poem shared by you! ! Thanks, Best regards. Sudipta Bhattacharyya.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 November 2013

Woah imaginative awesome poem on souls leavin the body! Extraordinary job! Pls coment my latest poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 November 2013

Woah imaginative awesome poem on souls leavin the body! Extraordinary job! Pls coment my latest poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 November 2013

Woah imaginative awesome poem on souls leavin the body! Extraordinary job! Pls coment my latest poem.

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Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

A beautiful thoughtful poem. A journey continues on to heaven,

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Usman Hanif 21 November 2011

six feet below is to lie thee... clap clap the poem sounds somewhat a transition from coldness to hope. good work

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The upward call of eternity! An inspired poem! Well done; D

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Vijay Sai R 21 June 2010

A whiff of eternal divinity!

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Afzal Shauq 20 June 2010

Journey to the heaven continues, Bodies surrender, Souls activate, Moving towards eternity. i agreed with your say what you expressed in this poem. phlosophical way of depth in this poem makes the idea more impressive and soul knowcking..because you tried to disclose the really..soul, body and the relationship between intangible and tangible things make the life running ahead.. but all go to end when there is no linkages between..yes uzma, life is every but nothing.. loved this poem a lot and read it few time and enjoyed the idea...wish you never stop writing...and always write such type of good poems..best of luck

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 May 2009

Stunning, wonderfully penned. Love it with 10.

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Muhammad Ali 12 May 2009

Good work Uzma! ! here you are sinking in deep thoughts sitting spart from the mob! ! 10.. for a nice poem Ali

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Emily Oldham 11 May 2009

wow some great phrases here keep writing! ! ! :) Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 May 2009

One right word….. Rises all spirits high, Journey to the heaven continues, Bodies surrender, Souls activate, Moving towards eternity. Journey of souls.........a collective move towards eternal life. A simple poem with beautiful broken imagery and deep meanings. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Sadiqullah Khan 16 May 2008

it is as if we are collectively going to some direction, , , i wonder if we have a word there and then we talk of loved ones left behind, , , i like it

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Muhammad Shanazar 28 September 2007

The process of transition has been described; pathos combined with didactic philosophy, simple diction and powerful imagery; nice attempt. Go on Uzma and take care. Shanazar

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