Sandra Fowler
W. Columbia, WV, USA
Wednesday, June 13, 2007

A Keepsake Comments

Rating: 3.6
One day you brought me raindrops in your hand.
'Here are some precious tears for you', you said.
A shadow bird was winging through the sky.
His silhouette escaped my finger tips.

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Sandra Fowler
COMMENTS
Roseann Shawiak 16 October 2013
A precious keepsake preserved in this beautiful poem forever. Great poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn
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Cindy Kreiner Sera 22 May 2009
Exquisite Sandra, imagery unbeatable, the theme of love rounded off into a keepsake - sheer bliss. Brilliant write
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what a beautiful home we have here...lovely write
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Nimal Dunuhinga 10 October 2007
I am sorry for my belated comment, Sandra this is a precious keepsake!
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Marvin Brato 20 September 2007
Beautiful as the rainbow in the sky.... a promise of love to last! . Thanks for sharing. High mark. Regards.
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Bill Grace 18 September 2007
Sandra, I get the feeling of such love! You might find my poem 'God in Texas' of interest only because it has a kindred spirit line to the last one in A Keepsake. Thank you. Bill Grace
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Cecil Hickman 01 July 2007
avery deep emotional poem that flows from your heart with both passion an compassion your words flow easily and without a dubt with style and grace, , , blessings..Cecil
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Melvina Germain 26 June 2007
A Keepsake would be this poem itself, beautiful Sandra.--Melvina--
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Rajaram Ramachandran 23 June 2007
He brings raindrops and says he brought tears and you also accept them as his tears. Your faith in him as a friend is more than his fake tears in his hand. What a nice way expressing your love and faith in your friend. That shows your soft heart. A lovely poem indeed!
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Cyclopseven R 23 June 2007
Another masterpiece from you. Wonderful perception decoded here with good words.
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Edna Javelosa 22 June 2007
the choice of words is so beautiful...with outstanding grace and dignity in itself..i loved it..
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Marina Gipps 19 June 2007
Very nice indeed...and quite a keepsake.
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Marci Made 19 June 2007
Your imagery in here is simply out of this world unbeatable....You most certainly have the magic touch in your poems...They are simply splendid and draw one in where one can feel what your writing....To me that is the definition of a poet, , I say to you BRAVO.! ! ~~~~~~~marci.xo
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Diane Violet 18 June 2007
Exquisite Sandra, simply exquisite! ! Hugs, Diane
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Amberlee Carter 18 June 2007
this is beautiful. I'm sorry I cannot offer anything else.. Always, Amberlee
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Uriah Hamilton 16 June 2007
Poets are the sad creatures walking in the rain, gazing at flowers, believing in impossible love. Your poetry captures the sadness I believe in, I wish I could place the tears of God in your hands, but I know that they're there and that will have to suffice. Uriah Hamilton
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R H 16 June 2007
Beautiful imagery that evokes both warmth and melancholy in this reflective piece. The opening two lines are simply stunning...Justine
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John Tiong Chunghoo 16 June 2007
no offence meant but some parts of the poem remind me of plath. especially the last few lines. similar sensitivities i felt when reading hers and also the subtle references to love that make the lines so strong. i love your poems, sandra. keep going.
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Sandra, it has all been said. can I just add: 'WOW'! ! ! ! ! Sheerly brilliant. t x
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Maria C. Pires Costa 15 June 2007
SANDRA, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.It conveys to us dep feelings/emotions and you really know with so much expertise how to welcome those blessed raindrops! You also show a true understanding towards that Friend. I love when you present Nature in its utmost beauty, allowing us to keep its sounds and sights live in our mind. I wish I could be so inspirational through my writing! ! Warmest regards and thank you very much for your recent comments. Maria C. Costa
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