Friday, July 20, 2007

A Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is in a kiss,
Body and soul, heart and mind,
When lovers lips meet.
Without that kiss emptiness,


David Barlow
Malini Kadir 04 April 2008


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Janice M Pickett 17 October 2007

Lovely sentiment David. Short sweet and powerful. Excellent.

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Blue Angel 24 September 2007

This poem should have a tag saying: ' Do not read if you don't want to feel like kissing now'...I want to KISS :)

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David Harris 07 August 2007

David, kisses to light a fire in an empty soul. Great poem my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Michael Gale 31 July 2007

A kiss is but a kiss... When heated and on target to the heart it is not amiss. Hard felt happiness of one kiss... Tossed at thee is no longer one remiss. Love can hang on tight... Once ye've been bit light. No more turn of the head away from ye you admire... Your heart will for sure hire. Ne'er to hurt and fire... Best be your desire. Great poem David. God bless lovers and poets-MJG.

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Princess Me 21 July 2007

A kiss...I feel is one of the most important factors of a relationship. A lot better be in that kiss in order to move on to...: -)

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Angela Norris 21 July 2007

The woman you kiss will kiss you back. Both hard and soft. Both clean and dirty. However and wherever she kisses you, it will come from her heart aswell as her mouth. A wonderful piece of writing again David.

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Marci Made 20 July 2007

PERFECT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [welcome back at last]. marci.xo

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Lynda Robson 20 July 2007

A kiss well-described, nice write, best wishes Lynda xx

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