Howard The Motivational Poet Simon

Howard The Motivational Poet Simon
Wednesday, September 26, 2012

A Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.7
Exiled on the isle of passion and shackled in the prison of craving.
Bottled up emotion - screaming and shouting and searching for an escape.
Like a dehydrated deer tracking water -Like a desert hunting an oasis.
Deluge of flames enrapture my being with the fervor of a thousand fire.

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Howard The Motivational Poet Simon
COMMENTS
Susan Williams 27 July 2018
Totally loved the flip-flop in this line- - -Like a dehydrated deer tracking water -Like a desert hunting an oasis. That was clever and explored even deeper. The word choices were very very sensual. This is a bouquet of 10's and onto fav list! ! ! !
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2018
A fantastic expression has been made on kiss, love and nature having nice penmanship. Each and every line is much enchanted. I want to quote few lines here..... Tranquillized by cloud of restraint yet burning with the inferno of love. ........ ........ ....... Tenderly touching - meticulously massage like a cool breeze in summer. Flesh of my flesh, bone of my bone, lips of my lips, tongue of my tongue. This poem goes to my poems list. Thanks,10.
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Mysia Hayling 03 August 2016
Another great write so captivating and interesting never a dull moment from start to finish. Love it
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Jeremy Horsford 24 July 2016
A very interesting mix of thoughts and experiences wrapped up in a kiss. It makes you think, that a kiss is never just a kiss.
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Sunil Babu 25 May 2016
Good one.really make us feel kissing.
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Nosheen Irfan 28 January 2016
Awesome. Rich in beautiful imagery, this one is surely a wonder work. No matter what I say, I can't praise it enough. Loved it absolutely.
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Hazel Durham 24 May 2015
Wow! The way you write is full of your passion burning with sizzling flames of love and tenderness leaping off the page with your glow of sheer talent that shines so bright!
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 August 2014
Simply phenomenal.......scripted with beautiful yet powerful words abound with so much emotions.....just amazing..........Simon......waiting to feel your new creations......10/10
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Patricia Grantham 03 March 2014
A very titillating and sensual feeling emanating from this very powerful write. Sounds like words from a love story and you express it very well. Simon. Great piece.
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Lyn Paul 20 January 2014
Very descriptive write on something so simple yet beautiful. Some great lines Howard. Thank You
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Heather Wilkins 09 December 2013
a very emotional poem. powerful and touching
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Jess Howard 23 August 2013
That's so power full well done. I love it. It is very expensive
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C. P. Sharma 08 July 2013
Well penned powerful emotions pressed into kiss leading to ecstatic joy. A beautiful poem.
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Raven Skye 21 December 2012
A lot of description. Well done.
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Johnathan Juarez 19 December 2012
a very interesting style. Great job
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Kara K 21 November 2012
Amazing. I truly feel something inside me each time I read this poem.
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Tunji Ibrahim 11 November 2012
Thematically, the imagery of explosive emotions comes to the fore. It is a bottled-up emotion. Yet, this fares beyond the shooting of mere kiss. Love it is, and swallowed up by tenderness and desire. Its depiction is deep, graphic, real and sincere. The narrator cannot afford to be a sexless zombie. Thus, he has taken the trouble to invent plausible dictions to weave a colossus of elucidation around his innate measure... Metaphor, simile, alliteration, hyperbole, personification and antithesis are one extensive shrewd poetic instrument used to paint some vivid image. Finally, the hearts blended together, gentle and fierce in turn. They savoured and delighted each other and shared their ecstasy. Now hear the narrator in his own diction: 'Giving and receiving, urging and merging, tightening and heightening... Floating on ecstasy'.
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Randy Micheal 06 November 2012
beautiful display of words........nicely written............
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Onyeme John 04 November 2012
I love the display of words here, a picture of deep reasoning to express the exigency of love in ur heart. Keep it up.
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Heather Wilkins 29 October 2012
A well written poem. Some excellent similies. a deer tracking water. Like a desert hunting an oasis. nice.
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