A Kiss Comments

Totally loved the flip-flop in this line- - -Like a dehydrated deer tracking water -Like a desert hunting an oasis. That was clever and explored even deeper. The word choices were very very sensual. This is a bouquet of 10's and onto fav list! ! ! !

A fantastic expression has been made on kiss, love and nature having nice penmanship. Each and every line is much enchanted. I want to quote few lines here..... Tranquillized by cloud of restraint yet burning with the inferno of love. ........ ........ ....... Tenderly touching - meticulously massage like a cool breeze in summer. Flesh of my flesh, bone of my bone, lips of my lips, tongue of my tongue. This poem goes to my poems list. Thanks,10.

Another great write so captivating and interesting never a dull moment from start to finish. Love it

A very interesting mix of thoughts and experiences wrapped up in a kiss. It makes you think, that a kiss is never just a kiss.

Good one.really make us feel kissing.

Awesome. Rich in beautiful imagery, this one is surely a wonder work. No matter what I say, I can't praise it enough. Loved it absolutely.

Wow! The way you write is full of your passion burning with sizzling flames of love and tenderness leaping off the page with your glow of sheer talent that shines so bright!

Simply phenomenal.......scripted with beautiful yet powerful words abound with so much emotions.....just amazing..........Simon......waiting to feel your new creations......10/10

A very titillating and sensual feeling emanating from this very powerful write. Sounds like words from a love story and you express it very well. Simon. Great piece.

Very descriptive write on something so simple yet beautiful. Some great lines Howard. Thank You

a very emotional poem. powerful and touching

That's so power full well done. I love it. It is very expensive

Well penned powerful emotions pressed into kiss leading to ecstatic joy. A beautiful poem.

A lot of description. Well done.

a very interesting style. Great job

Amazing. I truly feel something inside me each time I read this poem.

Thematically, the imagery of explosive emotions comes to the fore. It is a bottled-up emotion. Yet, this fares beyond the shooting of mere kiss. Love it is, and swallowed up by tenderness and desire. Its depiction is deep, graphic, real and sincere. The narrator cannot afford to be a sexless zombie. Thus, he has taken the trouble to invent plausible dictions to weave a colossus of elucidation around his innate measure... Metaphor, simile, alliteration, hyperbole, personification and antithesis are one extensive shrewd poetic instrument used to paint some vivid image. Finally, the hearts blended together, gentle and fierce in turn. They savoured and delighted each other and shared their ecstasy. Now hear the narrator in his own diction: 'Giving and receiving, urging and merging, tightening and heightening... Floating on ecstasy'.

beautiful display of words........nicely written............

I love the display of words here, a picture of deep reasoning to express the exigency of love in ur heart. Keep it up.

A well written poem. Some excellent similies. a deer tracking water. Like a desert hunting an oasis. nice.