Saturday, June 1, 2013

A Kiss Remembered Comments

Rating: 4.5

In my heart there is a place
that fills with delight with your embrace.
I know I felt it when we kissed.
And since that day, your touch I've missed.


Mark Dillon
Laurie X3 19 September 2013

What a short but sweet recollection. I see you are from Ireland. My Great Grandma Mucahey was born in Tipperary. I look forward to reading the rest of your work. Maybe get a glimpse of Ireland I hope!

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Princess Lilypad 18 August 2013

Romance reminiscent, Great great Write touching the strain. So very sad

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Hazel Durham 28 July 2013

Beautiful, charming and so heartfelt! Great write!

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Heather Wilkins 24 July 2013

a sweet touching poem. nice writing Mark

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Payal Parande 15 June 2013

Good night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that I shall say good night till it be morrow. William Shakespeare so beautifully expressed sir......just amazing

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R.j. Wynn 12 June 2013

Man that/s sure enough gonna get 'er done.

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agree with lyn, so tender and romantic read this make my mind go to the moment of my first kiss oh, i really miss that moment good job mark and thanks for sharing

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Lyn Paul 01 June 2013

Hi Mark Written with such tenderness, and we all love romance but a good book, a glass of Red and...... a little chocolate...welll.......

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Gajanan Mishra 01 June 2013

love, love kiss is the first stage. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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