Unwritten Soul


A Letter In The Wind - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Yellow foliage fallen on my hands
Remind me, they once were green
Reminisce me of our beautiful time
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Topic(s) of this poem: relationship, seasons


Comments about A Letter In The Wind by Unwritten Soul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/15/2017 7:05:00 AM)


    Sorry, please read ' marvellous' instead of 'marvdlous'. It has been inadvertently done. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/7/2017 9:17:00 AM)


    So beautiful and imagery. Heart touching depiction. Stunning expression. Above all a marvdlous poem. (Report) Reply

  • Simone Inez Harriman (8/7/2017 12:06:00 AM)


    WOW.....I am so knocked-out stunned at this beautifully penned poem. I shed tears reading this true masterpiece as your poem resonates with the sadness in my soul......I have known well the heartache from that distance and separation from the ones you love. Straight to my favorites. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (8/7/2017 7:30:00 AM)

    What should i say, and what i say here maybe less than what is the thing i really want to say to you...Thank you, although i know i have limited way of writing and expressing, but to know someone feel and appreciate my feeling and how i converted it in poetry..it just makes me feel stronger and feel worth it to express..i feel free...and you kindness gave all to this feeling, thanks Simone...Always make me feel fine, you deserve the best my dear friend

  • (7/21/2017 7:53:00 PM)


    Lovely imagery; sweet sentiments.
    Uplifting read!
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  • Hazel Durham (6/26/2017 5:03:00 AM)


    Such intense beauty of your words spilling with emotions onto the page with incredible imagery and a superb write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Cheryl Tutaan (6/1/2017 1:32:00 PM)


    A heart-touching, well written poem...I love the flow of emotions and words...Thank you for sharing, Soul...❤ (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/4/2017 2:41:00 AM)

    Again and again thanks to you :) You are one of soothing word in the wind..telling smile to wherever you lay on surface/people :)

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/17/2016 7:17:00 AM)

    Reminisce
    Reminiscence! Watching and waiting; with the muse of the melodies of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Navarre (10/9/2016 7:53:00 PM)


    Very Heartfelt! ! ! Touching Poem! Beautifully done! Grateful You shared! (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (10/9/2016 6:48:00 AM)


    A nice poem. Thank you.
    Robert
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  • (8/17/2016 2:55:00 PM)


    A letter... in the wind. A twinkle, in the globe... the globe of tear! A praying honest heart. Beauty of true relationship is all this poem. (Report) Reply

  • (6/5/2016 12:24:00 PM)


    Artful use if words and phrase... Very descriptive. Please post the artwork you did about it. (Report) Reply

  • (5/9/2016 9:14:00 AM)


    Yes, another very moving poem with an unerring sense of rhythm. It contains many beautiful thoughts expressed with great artistry. Glad I found you!
    Tom Billsborough
    Ps No you found me first! A big bonus for me.
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  • Heather Wilkins (8/11/2013 8:41:00 PM)


    this is a beautiful write. the last stanza a delight to write. enjoyed the write (Report) Reply

  • (7/3/2013 12:27:00 AM)


    Luvli poem indeed 'from me till end of my time, luvli all the way thru will read many times...excuse the luvli spelling its Yorkshire slang! which is said with deep meaning. regards (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2013 12:01:00 PM)


    You have a unique, extremely pleasing style.
    Wonderful, Soul!
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  • Vivek Tiwari (1/8/2013 10:48:00 AM)


    A rare but excellent piece. Goodly expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Colin Bradley (1/1/2013 12:14:00 AM)


    beautifully written excellent (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (12/14/2012 7:34:00 AM)


    Looking the same sun, hope it warming you
    Staring the moon bright, hope it shelters your night.

    This is undoubtedly a spectacular write and I enjoyed it very very much. I liked the thought in every part of this artistic piece. The best thing I saw and read in this piece is the wonderful imagination in it. the idea of getting sunlight from the sun looking at the moon for it is sheltering your friend.

    But you know I got relief to see that you do have a friend. Marvelous. Unwritten Soul
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  • (12/11/2012 7:36:00 AM)


    Awesomely beautiful! A sure fire 10 if it would only let me enter ratings. (Report) Reply

  • (11/30/2012 2:12:00 PM)


    This poem is absolutely beautiful! ! ! ^^ i could read your poems all day (Report) Reply










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