Barry Van Allen


A Long, Long, Time! - Poem by Barry Van Allen

Hidden in the shadows of her mind,
there are some reasons that the lady cannot find,
I could not see them as they were,
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  • (10/6/2015 10:43:00 AM)

    Expressive imagry. Intelligent, observational reference to mournful allusion.
    Like His use of questive terminology. Simple and effective!
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  • Kevin Patrick (11/29/2012 6:25:00 PM)

    Very sober, it reminds me of a girl who was a close friend of mine, who sadly is out of my life. A good heartfelt write (Report)Reply

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  • (7/27/2007 12:18:00 AM)

    I really like this poem. Good one and very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing it. Sincerely, Connie Webb (Report)Reply

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  • Colin J... (7/20/2007 1:32:00 PM)

    Two pieces of driftwood floating in a pond eventually come together.
    Lovely poem.
    All the Best.
    Colin J...
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  • (7/20/2007 12:33:00 PM)

    nicely written... alittle piece of your heart? ? (Report)Reply

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  • (7/20/2007 10:15:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! ! Gee you sure make words fit nicely together! ! ! I'll remind myself it's old stuff...but still very good stuff!
    Hugs,
    Dee
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