Romeo Della Valle

Freshman - 505 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

A Love's Desire - Poem by Romeo Della Valle

In my desperate need
To know of your whereabouts,
I asked the moon about you
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Comments about A Love's Desire by Romeo Della Valle

  • (12/8/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    ‘…Should I give up // Love's matters // And retire? …’

    No never because thro’ no answer is a kind of answer…LOVE is undying...
    Ten+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (12/7/2009 11:41:00 AM)

    This is a touching piece in which one seeks an answer to the loss of love. Nice piece! (Report)Reply

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  • Ramin Chaman (12/6/2009 1:33:00 PM)

    it is stunt advertising..Romeo

    really a good poem 10+
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  • (12/6/2009 1:01:00 PM)

    Should I give up

    nice sad confessional surrealistic poem, very well written

    10++++++++++
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  • (12/6/2009 12:09:00 PM)

    AWESOME! ! !
    good and smooth flowing
    i liked it
    -10 anjali
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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (12/6/2009 11:03:00 AM)

    Deep desires painted with passion.... (Report)Reply

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  • (12/4/2009 5:19:00 PM)

    Sweet, a blessed read indeed.. it was touching for me personally cause it kind of outlined the very situation i am in right now... so thank you it was very nice.10+ (Report)Reply

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  • (12/3/2009 6:23:00 AM)

    this is a wonderful poem nice work keep the hard work up
    love tears us all apart but few how can get over anything remains, and i'm not one of them
    i gave you 10 i really like it
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  • (12/2/2009 2:23:00 PM)

    Well expressed....Nice flow
    good job
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  • (12/2/2009 1:29:00 PM)

    wow..well done i really like it.love is so DESIREable i mean its so passionate. it leaves you breathless.. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/2/2009 12:19:00 PM)

    Love is a strong bond and you gave us a fine proof out of this elegy. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/1/2009 11:35:00 PM)

    'In my desperate need
    To know of your whereabouts,
    I asked the moon about you
    And it turned its back on me'
    I love the first part of this verse - it's stunning in its simplicity.
    This is a beautiful poem - thank you for sharing. Danielle
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  • (12/1/2009 10:57:00 PM)

    Very passionate and romantic story, don't forget that you are a great poet, never stop writting.
    There is love in every coner, you may just not no were to look,
    Soon the moon will give a response of you eternal soulmate, Juliet
    She who is you eternal enemy
    (if you no the story)
    So never give up on love it will soon come to you.
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  • (12/1/2009 10:50:00 PM)

    wow that was sweet and sad i think that no matter what love will be found if you just believe good job! (Report)Reply

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