Monday, January 13, 2003

A Man Young And Old: I. First Love Comments

Rating: 2.9

Though nurtured like the sailing moon
In beauty's murderous brood,
She walked awhile and blushed awhile
And on my pathway stood

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William Butler Yeats
COMMENTS
William F. Dougherty 07 July 2017

Willy's slant rhymes are artfully doe.

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Byron Barsamian 30 July 2013

fickle and unthoughtful return of love. Proves that love is often unrequited.

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Andrew Hoellering 15 December 2009

After a magical opening, Yeats describes La Belle Dame sans Merci who soaks up affection, offering nothing in return. The moon image is carried throughout the poem, and it works because it reflects the light of the sun. 'I have attempted many things/And not a thing is done' is a perfect expression of the stunning effect that love can have (I speak from experience!)

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this is truly a classic!

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Faten Mohamad 28 August 2007

In fact it is a very wonderful poem that is full of many different feeling.by describing the woman who love.

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Ruby Root 10 July 2006

This was interesting he was not very lucky with his love. He is a writer with refinement and is cultivating. Excellent write.

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