Wednesday, March 18, 2009

A Maze Of Living Comments

Rating: 5.0
You are wandering the maze of the life
not seeing the purpose or the meaning,
and after all you know that the 'royal road'
is leading where the beginning and the end

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Maria Barbara Korynt
COMMENTS
Dagmara Anna 24 July 2009
Very beautiful poem. Good idea and work. I like it very much. DA
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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 May 2009
Wonderful poem. I love your imagery/metaphor: 10++ 'Because we are only pawns on the chessboard of Him...'
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Hazem Al Jaber 22 March 2009
beautiful amazing penned.. thank you dear maria.. hazem al..
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 20 March 2009
Your poem reminded me of a famous saying of Christ.......... Oh who beareth earthly load come and bears my yoke............It's easy to bear...... This stanzas are pregnant with great spiritual wisdom......... Nothing is happening for no reason, so let us learn not to make the same mistakes and let us ask God and the man to forgive guilts for us for the sake of the Great Mercy. Because we are only pawns on the chessboard of Him... He is the Puppeteer and we are the puppets.......And he controls us by the threads of fate..............When we are ready to bear our crosses and ready to follow him, we are ready for salvation............ Good Write......10+++
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Malcolm The Last. 18 March 2009
I like this one, its has vivid imagery.
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