Fay Slimm

Rookie - 112 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

A Meeting Of Souls. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Every once in a while something magical
Happens when ordinary life turns itself
Into the call of the wild. Soul meets soul.
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  • (7/10/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    Exposes vast spaces of new fresh-faced Assurance.
    I love this line. I have been there.
    This is so very well said Fay. I wish I had said it.
    I can learn a lot from reading your work.
    Sincerely,
    Susan
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (12/28/2008 12:10:00 AM)

    This piece has the gliding movement of ''The Skater's Waltz....The fine line, but one that forms the binding nexus with love, romance, and spirituality...is well expressed here...Excellent work, young lady!

    FjR
    2008
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  • Fay Slimm (12/8/2008 12:45:00 PM)

    Sorry this made you 'shiver' Rachael - but thanks for th lovely comments.... Fay. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/4/2008 9:39:00 AM)

    Besides the fine message of this enchanting poem, what particularly appealed to me was it's structure, Fay. One does not often see the combination of three and five line verses in a poem, as generally is all one or the other, though I have seen three line verses to begin and end a traditional quatrain poem several times. But in poetry, it is not the structure, but the words which make an impact upon the reader, this this fine write does that very well. One cannot escape the feeling of being a bit happier for having read this delightful write. Carl. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/3/2008 3:32:00 AM)

    The true meeting of souls is magical and lives long. This is a wonderful piece of work. Enjoying the reads. May peace be within your heart each and everyday.

    Scott
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  • Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (11/30/2008 10:45:00 AM)

    Hello Fay, a truly delightful read and one that keeps the interests, good story line. I enjoyed, Loyd (Report)Reply

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  • (11/28/2008 7:21:00 PM)

    A wonderful lyric accounting of the meeting of souls. A much healthier encounter than depicted in your Dangerous Liason. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/27/2008 10:30:00 AM)

    If there were 10 million icy cold hearts inthis world not one of them would be yours my spring chicken, what a lucky soulmate you have, warm loving piece of work, simple must for the eye and theheart Chris 10der Chris (Report)Reply

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  • (11/27/2008 6:50:00 AM)

    When two souls are in tune, the result is always pure magic. Praise
    for your romantic write.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (11/27/2008 6:34:00 AM)

    Fay, nice piece of work.
    Ian
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