A Mind Unfold. Poem by Polly Klomp

A Mind Unfold.

Rating: 5.0


Numerous sparks are running through my head,
Asking me what to do,
A million thoughts are passing by,
And it’s all about you.

I think I wished for this,
And than it just happened.
I might have dreamed of this,
And I can’t quit.
I don’t know this feeling,
But I unconsciously love it.

My eyes are rolling as I begin to wonder.
Maybe it is meant to be?
Or am I going “down under”?
I think my mind is tricking me.

Do I want to believe it?
Or is it all a lie?
Do we want to do this?
Or am I just not _that_ guy?

As this can’t get any worse
I’m going in.
I stop my boundaries
I’ll take you for a spin.
And when I’m done,
Be sure to tell me how you feel
Because when I’m through with you
Your life will look surreal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Burgess 13 August 2009

Loved this poem! ! well done!

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Danielle Guscott 24 July 2009

'And when I’m done, Be sure to tell me how you feel Because when I’m through with you Your life will look surreal' Beautiful - wonderful - fantastic! I love this piece! Keep writing!

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