A Missed Chance Poem by Death Walking

A Missed Chance

Rating: 5.0


I looked
I saw
I wish
I missed

I begged
I prayed
I believed
I failed

I looked
I saw
A wish
A star

I wish
Upon it
I missed
Its gone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amna Rukhsar 29 March 2010

nice and very good

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AWSOME POEMS LOVED IT 10/10 KEEP WRITING DUDE :)

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Iron Panda 23™ 30 March 2010

short but meaningful....loved it i did^-^

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Monica Arlene 16 May 2010

short and sweet... I love it! !

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sometimes the words unspoken are the meaning a writer wants the reader to find... i love this poem...

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Kelsi Brockway 16 February 2012

i really love this poem. Funny though just a few nights ago i saw a shooting star and i was so shocked that i blinked and it was gone and with it the chance to make a wish.

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Romeo Della Valle 02 November 2011

Powerful and thought provoking with a unique style! Keep it up! You got what it takes to make in the Poetry World: TALENT! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Arfa Iris 14 October 2011

good one...............

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Devon McElveen 29 April 2011

I enjoyed this poem, it makes me think about the stars I failed to wish upon.

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Chyna Parker 20 April 2011

interesting style of writing I liked it there was room for imagination and I like that when it comes to poetry well done again Chyna

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