indira babbellapati

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A Monsoon Precursor - Poem by indira babbellapati

till then, the earth
was choked in
sweltering heat
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  • (7/16/2010 11:54:00 PM)

    Nicely crafted imagery. Awe and contentment. The smells when parched earth is satiated. Well done.___Baru Gobira (Report)Reply

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  • (7/15/2010 5:50:00 AM)

    Diction is so effective to make me visualise monsoon. Great work, Ma'am and thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Malaya Roses (7/6/2010 10:54:00 PM)

    nice expression of nature and it's act.
    very impressive and understandable by all walks of life.
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  • Gita Ashok (7/6/2010 3:07:00 AM)

    in a flash i saw
    the earth lying smug
    and shining like
    a pearl bathed…

    satiated, she threw up
    her unique perfume…

    Fabulous! You have brought out the beauty of the first rain so well in this write. I could actully smell the fresh moist earth after reading it.
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