You are my child,
given to me by some miracle
that I cannot comprehend
I was worthy of.
Sorry for the loss. May her soul rest in perfect peace
It's a beautiful poem. Mother's love has no equal.
New to Poem Hunter. Wow! This is a beautifully worded poem. I think every Mother should read this poem out loud to her child(ren) at least once in their lifetime. Very special indeed.
read my ' don't go and leave them'. the children is my lives!
'Your children are not your children. They are the sons and daughters of life's longing for itself and though they come through you, yet they belong not to you. You may give them your love, but not your thoughts. for they have their own thoughts. You may house their bodies, but not their souls. For their souls live in the land of tomorrow which you may not visit, even in your dreams. You may strive to be like them. But seek not to make them like you, for life goes not backward, nor tarries with yesterday.'
Your beautiful poem reminded me of these words from Gibran's The Prophet, which I have typed here from memory. You share the wonder and joy of motherhood with great humility and heart-felt tenderness in this very special poem. love, Allie xxxx
Lee this is a stunning poem about a mother's love for her child. Brilliant. Top marks and thank you for sharing it my friend.
I think that I like you just the way you are, , , Stunning!
Love duncan X
Oh, Lee, this is beautifully written as only a mother could..from the heart and very touching..thank you for sharing..you are the best mother..
Ih here you have shown some of the many reasons we are thankful for our children, They are the greatest gifts of life...When young we are their very world..When older they survive as we've taught them to do, on their own, making their own lives....I wonder than, sometimes.why it is so easy for them to more or less forget at times, the one whose always been there for them....Enjoy them while their in your care and young for these are the best years of your life...A wonderful poem.........marci.xo
This is very simple and sentimental, but it has structure, and is very evocative.
it feels good to be accepted for what you are. and one gets that only from those who really love us like our mom, dad and spouse, children. good write keep this up.
A very beautiful and emotional poem. Loved it.
Beautiful Lee, this piece shines with the love a mother holds for her child.
from a mother to her child from her child to her mother.I am sure you are an amazing wonderful caring mother.
Love this poem Lee
All the best
Lee, A new Friend, how delighted I am. Thank you for your comments about 'Insanity at the Mall'. Please, whenever you have time, read the rest of my poems. I just read, 'A Mother's love for her child' amd cried. I plan to read the rest of your poems over the next day or so. You are the same age as my oldest son.He has Four children now! My challenging, wonderfrul grandchildren. You certainly have talent and I am glad you decided to write to me and to share your gift with others!
Susan B :)
when the words com from heart, all the world is not enough for these words,
mother is mother forever, very nice feeling, very nice poem, and God pless your child, i am grand father and i know how you feel about the flowers of our life..
A truley lovely poem, well written to. I look forward to reading more of your work, well done.
I was worthy of, great line, makes the poem...........................
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