Tuesday, February 12, 2008

A Mountain Speaks Comments

Rating: 3.2
That distant valley
Far below
Was I...as a child
........Eons ago


James B. Earley
Akhtar Jawad 18 April 2018
Beautiful is the sleeping mountain and beautiful is the poem describing it.
0 0 Reply
Jr Cuyam 31 March 2016
Very inspiring write. I hope I could make one like this ;)
0 0 Reply
Shirley Hanley 03 January 2010
This poem has many layers... I am very moved by your observations. I've probably seen that mountain [I was once a stewardess living in Burlingame]. We all are as grains of sand and together we form God's beach.
0 0 Reply
Indira Renganathan 14 July 2009
I agree with all other comments....wordless more I clap...keep clapping...and...may my endless clapping reach that speaking mountain...special clapping for thoe last two lines....awesome
0 0 Reply
Mimi Fakhira 12 May 2009
There's a lot of benefit by reading this page. My heart is touched by the beautiful words and inspired me to write more good poems... and I also got to learn a bit of history and geography! ! ! Thanks a lot.10++++++ from me......
0 0 Reply
Reshma Ramesh 06 May 2009
what a beautiful write.................. you have truly spoken for the mountain....well penned
0 0 Reply
Cathryn Adeli 20 February 2009
oh yes, it is so and it is not so. what happened so long ago. i also have a sleeping lady. she lays between the blue of sky and sea. i will put it my poems, tomorrow just for you. amazing this time i did not vote and the comment area came to life. dunno. but love it. thanks for sharing
0 0 Reply
Chitra - 15 October 2008
a philosophical read, with profound thought weaved flawlessly
0 0 Reply
Jean Mallette 12 September 2008
Though beautifully concise, the vivid imagery speaks volumes. Excellent rendering of man's minute position in God's Timelessness.
0 0 Reply
Olivia Estampador 23 August 2008
I read some of your poems...not only are they well written, they are also well- thought! It seems like in each poems, you reflect deeply on things and circumstances you encounter. Each of us have our own unique interpretations about poems. I hope my interpretation hits your own even a little. The mountain speaks... it has spoken to you during your quiet times. As you gazed at the mountain's beauty, you began to think of your worth, your existence. At the end, you realized again that you are a mere speck of sand in the world... you may be insignificant to others but still, you are important to others no matter how few they are. I believe that God uses things and people to help and talk to us. Just think of how he used Mt. Talapaise to connect with you... By the way, thanks for your comment. God bless and take care.
0 0 Reply
Ivor Hogg 18 August 2008
Very yrue my friend man is an insignificant speck in the vastness of creation
0 0 Reply
Satheesan Rangorath 14 August 2008
Dear Mr.James B.Earley It is very refreshing to read your cute poems. I think Mnt. Talapaise is really influencing your verses with her beauty and magnanimity. I read some of of your poems they are great. For your kind information I do not feel I am matured enough to write comments about your poems as my exprience is English literature is very minimal, I studied commerce and Law both subjects drains away one's artistic talents. So here I am posting my poems inroder to tease all of you. Greetings Satheesan rangorath
0 0 Reply
Assorted Thoughts 10 August 2008
This is truly a work of art.
0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 01 August 2008
Beautiful meaningful write, James...in fact it is you who speaks here, the mountain responding to your words in your mind...10/10
0 0 Reply
Lourdes Schopenhauer 28 July 2008
You speak like the father of our fathers, wise and grand but always at level. Written in such a way that one can hear your voice like a sunset coming up behind the mountain. My native lakota blood touched base here for a moment. Thank you.
0 0 Reply
Bob Gibson 28 July 2008
James! I'm gobsmacked! not only withy your poem, but with your poets notes! , you are saved as one of my favorite poets! thank you, regards Bob
0 0 Reply
Bonnie Collins 21 July 2008
James what a beautifull and peacefull write, it is so filled with beauty and warmth.. This is absolutly wonderfull..... I am so glad I have read this..... You have a magnificent mind.... Bonnie
0 0 Reply
James this is Beautiful! You reflect so well...and share your sightings so magnificently.....I Love the insight you weaved into this piece of art. Thanx so much for sharing with us............... ((smile)) Shelley
0 0 Reply
Dawn Slanker 07 July 2008
You gave her a beautiful and spiritual voice. Wonderful poem.
0 0 Reply
Katherine Wiley 17 June 2008
A very original thought-the reflections of a mountain which has been here before man and will be after. A good read. Kate
0 0 Reply

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

2/27/2021 4:29:45 AM #