Tuesday, December 25, 2007
A Mouse (Haiku) Comments
Rating: ★3.6
Ben Gieske
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Ramesh Rai
17 October 2014
This reflects the natural phenomenon of life. Nice.
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Dr Hitesh Sheth
14 March 2009
In wintry night
cat catch the crying mice
is it tears or dew...............
Good write........
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
04 February 2009
Ben,5th place? -your haiku should have been in first place! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a ten from me...
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Anjali Sinha
13 January 2009
wow a lovely haiku mouse edging to cheese
-10 anjali
(read mine too haikus of love)
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Kesav Easwaran
30 October 2008
nice one..a 'koo'ing image on the moon and the cloudy spread...10
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Estrella Baldemosa
29 June 2008
a good haiku...poet is not self -absorbed and discrete from the object, a real haiku...
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Chris Mendros
25 May 2008
This is as good a 'ku as i've seen on here. What else is there in the mouse's world, but that cheese?
Watch out for the- (SMACK!) ...
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Duncan Wyllie
25 May 2008
MOUSEY PUT YOUR CRASH HELMET ON FIRST LOL!
Thanks Ben
Love duncan X
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Eithne Queen of Celts
19 April 2008
It's the goal of every haiku, that of expressing a whole universe in a few short lines.I love this one.It made me feel in the shoes of the little mouse.There is no one to stop me from getting what i want (the cheese) .But is it moral, is it right to get the cheese?
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Nimal Dunuhinga
28 December 2007
Oh! What a beautiful poem? This resembles me Takuboku.Ishikawa.
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