A Mouse (Haiku) - Poem by Ben Gieske

This reflects the natural phenomenon of life. Nice. (Report)Reply

In wintry night
cat catch the crying mice
is it tears or dew...............
Good write........ (Report)Reply

Ben,5th place? -your haiku should have been in first place! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a ten from me... (Report)Reply

wow a lovely haiku mouse edging to cheese
-10 anjali
(read mine too haikus of love) (Report)Reply

nice one..a 'koo'ing image on the moon and the cloudy spread...10 (Report)Reply

a good haiku...poet is not self -absorbed and discrete from the object, a real haiku... (Report)Reply

This is as good a 'ku as i've seen on here. What else is there in the mouse's world, but that cheese?
Watch out for the- (SMACK!) ... (Report)Reply

MOUSEY PUT YOUR CRASH HELMET ON FIRST LOL!

Thanks Ben

Love duncan X (Report)Reply

It's the goal of every haiku, that of expressing a whole universe in a few short lines.I love this one.It made me feel in the shoes of the little mouse.There is no one to stop me from getting what i want (the cheese) .But is it moral, is it right to get the cheese? (Report)Reply

A beautiful haiku this one Ben well done (Report)Reply

Oh! What a beautiful poem? This resembles me Takuboku.Ishikawa. (Report)Reply

ALL THE TIME TRYING TO AVOID THE CAT... CUTE POEM! (Report)Reply

A delicate poem in exquisite taste... love, Allie xxxx (Report)Reply