Thampi KEE

Silver Star - 3,414 Points (kerala India)

A New Dream - Poem by Thampi KEE

A single lone bird
you cry for ever
carrying a green meadow
in this dreamy world
I give you mine
you give me fine
life is not sad
sad way you said

People we love
weeping cry for love
must give me yours
five handful love
you give me
your five fingers
and full of love
not soaking and blending into mass bath of blood
pat the love for love
A single lone bird
I love you

break the heart for love
breaking my words for love
barely my love for the heart
What you say
could change this world again
dont delay the cry for this love
break the heart you love for them

I give you mine
you give me
your five handful,
and break the heartful
soaking into the mass of bath....
A single lone bird
you cry for ever


Comments about A New Dream by Thampi KEE

  • Ruby Mostazir (12/16/2013 7:56:00 AM)

    nice :) (Report)Reply

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  • Sarojini Pattayat (11/14/2012 12:09:00 PM)

    nice poem.Third stanza is interesting.
    Best wishes.
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  • teal Sky (4/6/2012 9:44:00 PM)

    beautiful poem, good use of short lines. (Report)Reply

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  • Lawrence H (3/18/2012 7:57:00 AM)

    Thampi, A cry for a new love dream. Good poem using metaphor.. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/14/2012 12:24:00 PM)

    Very nice & beautiful poem
    I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/10/2012 1:17:00 PM)

    very beautiful poem! i really like it :) (Report)Reply

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  • (12/28/2011 11:39:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem! I enjoyed it very much. Thank you! (Report)Reply

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  • (10/10/2011 2:09:00 AM)

    ...
    I give you mine
    you give me fine
    life is not sad
    sad way you said

    True, life is not sad. But life is what we make of it. Keep sharing Thampi. Thank you.
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (6/24/2011 1:03:00 AM)

    very nice.the way you have communicated with birds is touching.loved it. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/21/2011 7:46:00 AM)

    A single lone bird
    you cry for ever...

    why is singleness always related to crying? I agree that there's nothing nice in isolation and it doesn't always end in tears.
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  • (4/7/2011 5:30:00 AM)

    Excellent, expressions beautifully crafted. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/15/2010 8:58:00 AM)

    Enjoyable read that touches the heart! Well penned.; D (Report)Reply

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  • Dickson Mseti (4/23/2010 7:54:00 AM)

    wonderful poem.i give you Ten for this one. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/5/2010 8:03:00 AM)

    A WELL WRITTEN POEM!
    Alas in Delhi I find only money culture, and further up north, only agriculture!
    My place of birth, the good old Calcutta, was once the seat of great tradition of culture! Now Bengal politics is eating it away, I have nothing more to say!
    Thanks for your comments! - Raj
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  • (2/3/2010 6:48:00 AM)

    I really love this poem...
    I give u mine n u give me....so nice
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  • (10/30/2009 3:35:00 PM)

    A superb poem with a great flow and very innovative also, very sweet expressions, thanks for sharing! 10/10 (Report)Reply

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  • (6/11/2009 5:30:00 AM)

    beautifull.what an intense feelings. wonderfull write.
    see this para fo its intense emotion.

    'I give you mine
    you give me
    your five handful,
    and break the heartful'

    voted 10
    love
    surya
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/29/2009 2:16:00 AM)

    Very lovely and much touchy 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (5/20/2009 4:24:00 AM)

    Really touching expression of love
    regards
    sandhya
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  • (12/3/2008 10:00:00 PM)

    Love is beautiful,
    something too beautiful to be carried with our only both hands.
    but we can carry it,
    with an additional two hands of our lovers.
    Nice piece..
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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 13, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, March 28, 2011


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