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A New Light...

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Mine was never the choice
As red was too bright essence
But as the bride scintillate
Donned in red of love gift
Her groom gifted for the day special
Finally uniting to make a whole.

Like the pages of novel marvelous
Passed the time at the alter prescious
As the vows were exchanged

And commitment was witnessed
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A New Light...
Friday, October 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,marriage,relationship,courtship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Red, read and recite was my challenge and I thought how to incorporate all in one. So the flow became something like this.
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Rajnish Manga 14 October 2020

Your challenge with regard to red, read and recite has paid off superbly in the form of this masterpiece. It deals with a groom and a bride who embark on a great journey of their life promising 'pleasure immeasurable' for both of them.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 October 2020

lovely cheries glad you reflected can you translate my poem this many read it now do it in english pl ?? ????? ?? ??? ?? - ?? ????? ?? ??? ?? ????? ???? ?????? ??? ?? ??? ??? ?????? ???? ?? ???? ?? ???? ???? aur jubh unka phone aajata hai ????? ??? ???? ?? ?? ??? ?????? ?? ????? ???? ?? ????? ??? ???? ?? ???? ??? ?? ??? ????? ???? ???? ??? ?? ?? ???? ??? ?? etc u have readed

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