Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 332,119 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Place Called - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

place called “home” is to feel homely,
God’s creation standing by to look so lovely,
May be she is with all her elegance,
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Comments about A Place Called by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Oratile Diratsagae (4/9/2017 12:01:00 PM)


    I love it, I have to say thanks for sharinh (Report) Reply

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  • (1/27/2017 6:43:00 AM)


    Heaven here, hell here, we need only to create the way. And if we create it with love, we'll see it His Way.
    Outstanding poem, sir. Well worth the mighty 10!
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  • Ernest Makuakua (2/5/2016 7:36:00 AM)


    Home” is an end of universe,
    Does not come as surprise and need to rehearse,
    It is place where even HE may prefer to stay,
    Heaven here, hell here, we need only to create the way

    WELL TOLD POEM

    THANK YOU FOR SHARING
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  • Adeline Foster (12/11/2015 10:56:00 AM)


    Home is a great subject for this poem. Read mine - Home Is -
    Adeline
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  • Twisted Strange (3/28/2010 8:32:00 PM)


    This is a very deep beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bethany Williams (3/20/2010 9:06:00 PM)


    Such beauty in a great poem. Great words used in this poem.. I had such a great time reading this....10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (1/29/2010 10:00:00 PM)


    A 10++ for sure. A beautiful write about the place where we find happiness and solace! (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (1/25/2010 10:20:00 AM)


    i am the 100th person to rate this one... i gave it a 10... it's so good. (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2010 2:03:00 AM)


    a home is a place that you will find love and care...
    respect and peace are there when i go home...
    i'm going home now co'z i found the emptiness when i'm alone
    every single minutes my home keeps waiting for me to go back! ! !
    beautiful poem! ! !
    I'm going home! !
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  • (12/19/2009 1:45:00 PM)


    a fact no one can deny............10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2009 11:00:00 PM)


    a place called house is where we stay
    a place called home is what we make
    thank you for sharing this with us... a beautiful poem
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  • (12/6/2009 2:44:00 AM)


    A beautifuly described structure of home and its atmosphere, we dwell, with our life, ....with all serene and tranquil breaths....... (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2009 5:52:00 AM)


    the worst on PoemHunter is that the steals the comments and then a man must again write once again... so I liked thod you poem much! I felt as of it breathes the LOVE&PEAVE&HAPPINESS...and I wish you it of all my heart :)
    Thank you for sharing and +10 is yours :)
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  • Annalee Hopkins-somerville (11/30/2009 8:41:00 AM)


    Well written! ! ! A 10++ for sure. Thanks for sharing it! (Report) Reply

  • Louis Rams (11/8/2009 6:15:00 PM)


    like the song says 'a house is not a home when there's no one there'
    good write! a ten
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (11/7/2009 8:40:00 AM)


    it seems that hundreds have already rated and commented this poem and all of them gives this one a thumb up. I think it deserves it. (Report) Reply

  • (11/4/2009 9:25:00 AM)


    A well structured poem.. a place you can really call home. (Report) Reply

  • (11/2/2009 11:25:00 PM)


    Yes; that indeed is a home! What a fine crafting! (Report) Reply

  • (11/2/2009 6:50:00 PM)


    Home is the core of our being and your poem spells it out pefectly,
    every little thing in it is part of us our history -nice thoughts through out
    God's creation ++++++++++++10
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  • (11/1/2009 3:13:00 AM)


    “Home” is an end of universe,
    Does not come as surprise and need to rehearse,
    It is place where even HE may prefer to stay,
    Heaven here, hell here, we need only to create the way

    Nicely written,
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