A Prayer Comments

My Lord, I pray, please, be by me, Please help me write a useful thing, Please make my mind so helpful, free And I`ll be happy then, I think… i liked this ending of your beautiful prayer. thank you. tony

What a beautiful prayer. Anything we ask for in Jesus name -we shall receiive. My poems are not like yours but I feel the same way deep inside. I feel a clean and pure need also.

Just like the Enigmatic smile of Mona Lisa, You poems do have some mysterious elements which are hard to trace but I don't how to say your poetry always intrigues me. I like the depth of the this poem--- Who died one day due to the 'knife… I will love him because of light, I know his soul is quite dark. By the way it a different sort of prayer of which I never hard.10+++++++++++++

Seeking God's guidance. What a beautiful prayer poem. 10

A prayer that voiced from heart....when heart ask to who made us, must be pure and tell open for all...but did we forget to thank to Him first? before we ask for more? He will listen to us, your prayer..when we believe then it start to relief...a nice poetry Eka! _Unwritten Soul

a very strong poem from a pure and open heart!

''oh God, please answer, give a clue''this line is the crux of the humanity as well as your poem, i like the poem very much, very nicely worded and nicely knitted poem, cheers my dear poetess.

you have a unique way of hopping over life's canvas.... easily taking in leaps and steps....keep the reader guessing nice style... :) be happy

A really great poem, a fantastic write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Time machine.