Valsa George

A Rare Beauty Beheld! - Poem by Valsa George

Through the country paths, I lazily loitered
Watching Nature in its changing hue
Straying a little farther into the interiors
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Topic(s) of this poem: compassion

Comments about A Rare Beauty Beheld! by Valsa George

  • (8/27/2018 1:10:00 PM)

    Thanks Valsa for writing this rare beauty of vivid images! With you, I have been strolling in the country perceiving the beauty of nature. The vivid picture was made true through the quatrain-technique with which the reader feels that she/he walks and perceives some amazing scenes that are unique to the country life. (Report) Reply

    (8/28/2018 6:59:00 AM)

    You are absolutely right Naeema! Such scenes can be found only in a country side. Meeting that boy has been a rare experience and its memory still stays so green in my mind! Thank you for your lovely comment. Sorry, I couldn't find your page!

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  • Jasbir Chatterjee (1/13/2015 2:39:00 AM)

    It is a very beautiful poem... (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (1/6/2015 9:11:00 AM)

    A Rare Beauty painted so well
    I just loved it very well
    Natures beauty shaded well
    Description of son's love for mom portrayed very well.

    A Fantastic poem Valsa. Your pen flows freely on any topic very well. Loved it.
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  • Paul Sebastian (1/3/2015 12:19:00 AM)

    A poignant poem so well pictured bringing home a message of simplicity, innocence, love-driven mission and hope discovered in your encounter with the about fifteen-year-old boy. Very perceptive. Thank you. Score perfect 10. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Sebastian (1/3/2015 12:14:00 AM)

    A poignant poem so well pictured bringing home a message of simplicity, innocence, love-driven mission and hope discovered in your encounter with the about fifteen-year-old boy. Very perceptive. Thank you. Score perfect 10. (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick (1/1/2015 2:33:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem! But how could it be otherwise since your subjects, so lovingly developed, are both beautiful. First, it is the natural beauty of a landscape not yet blighted by industrialism and pollution. And there is a perfect match between your mind which registers the beauty and nature which tosses it outward at a prodigious rate. You capture that special transition moment between seasons which symbolizes the special humanm moments we share. And one of those becomes your second subject. You deftly handle the evocation of this uncorrupted young man, he blesses us readers with his innocence and sincerity. You know what I kept thinking of as I read this poem? Those early poems of Wordsworth when he too was hiking in a natural setting and meeting peasants whose integrity so impressed him with the natural goodness of humanity. Generations later his poems convey hope to us, and now you have given us a contemporary example of the visionary poetry. A vision of blessedness on earth with no supernatural intervention. I was indirectly quoting Wordsworth when I described your view of nature who linked the human mind to nature. What a wonderful poem to read on New Year's Day! (Report) Reply

  • (1/1/2015 8:57:00 AM)

    This is a very beautiful piece written by you, mam. I loved it's flow and the simple tone of the narrator.
    It brings out all the nuances of the moments and finishes quite beautifully. lovely.
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (12/30/2014 5:43:00 AM)

    beautiful write! ! loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (12/28/2014 6:40:00 PM)

    Beautiful words Valsa from such a kind heart. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/28/2014 12:17:00 AM)

    I saw him disappeared behind tree makes this special momentum in poetic society. A gentle breeze passed over and we all wait for such situation where compassion comes in mind ever. Very nice poem shared on. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/25/2014 7:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem full of compassion, deep feelings, and love. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (12/24/2014 7:55:00 AM)

    A lovely narrative poem, well articulated and nicely penned. A beautiful piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/23/2014 9:35:00 PM)

    While parting, I handed over him some money.. nice gesture

    many want
    but can't
    for the fear of insult
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  • Dr Pintu Mahakul (12/23/2014 7:35:00 PM)

    Rare beauty is ever attractive towards mind. Nature keeps such beauty that nurtures always. Life is painted with colour and we feel cheerful moments. Nature seems to rejoice. Great and wonderful one. (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (12/23/2014 10:55:00 AM)

    Of all relations we speak of I think the one between a mother and her son is special and it is worth a meditative interpretation... Great poem Valsa Madam.. A sure 10 for this write. (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2014 10:24:00 AM)

    A gentle breeze passed caressing us
    As if over a kind gesture, Nature seemed to rejoice.....think its a poem on real incident....great work madam
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/22/2014 5:18:00 PM)

    From every utterance, I could sense his filial love. Really very beautiful poem composed. It gives a clear picture of life and feelings. Natured seemed to rejoice makes this wonderful really. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (12/22/2014 3:37:00 PM)

    A beautiful write about nature and about life for a boy who happily has dedicated his life to his mother with an innocent contentment at his choice of lifestyle and your compassion for his situation!
    A moving and superb write!
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  • Rajesh Thankappan (12/22/2014 9:41:00 AM)

    A touching poem laced with the sheer beauty of the verse. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (12/22/2014 6:27:00 AM)

    A touching poem, helping a boy who is struggling for ailing mother is service to God..................10 (Report) Reply

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