Friday, July 15, 2005

A River Poem Comments

Rating: 4.1
Inside the river are
the sky, the cloud, and the sun.
In my hands’ bowl is the river.

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Mamta G.Sagar
COMMENTS
Heran Messkir 6c3 14 December 2020
It was a really nice poem.
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Yaphet Haieab 09 December 2020
river, cloud, sun, sky, bowl
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KEROD MICHIYAS 09 December 2020
It looked great but how the woman said it sadly
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bobby 09 December 2020
I think its a very interesting story. I like how the narrator is so mysterious and I'm still trying to figure out who is in who.
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Eliyana Theodros 6c1 09 December 2020
Wow, amazing poem! ! !
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titan ermias 09 December 2020
hi how are u my name is titan ermias
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Sabrina Desanto 09 December 2020
it is a really nice poem
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Abigail Medhurst 09 December 2020
I love it beause it warms your heart and I wil read it day and night
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Abigail Medhurst 09 December 2020
It is wondrful and heart warming poem that I will read day and night after knowing it
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Jazib Kamalvi 26 October 2017
A great start with a nice poem, Mamta. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
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Chitra - 17 October 2008
eloquent beacons of poetic light
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Peter A. Crowther 15 July 2005
What lovely imagery. Great poem - definitely a ten plus!
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