Friday, October 23, 2009

A Seeming Less Heart Comments

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I hear my thoughts scurry fast across the horizon...
I see how the sun rises but I can not retrace my mind.
For now, it seems that I have no words (not righteously, at least) .
Not even the least.


Brenda Arroyo
Turgay Hiniz 11 March 2010
it is very nice, you are really talented. Your rhyme, the way using words is very wonderful. Thanks for sharing such a nice poem with us like this one.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 November 2009
can not speak my being because I am left with a single emotion. An emotion of many emotions and I can not figure it... For it is only a quivering heartbeat that burrows in my veins, Afraid to appear as a vulgar scar upon my, it not seemingly less heart but it is natural and nothing to feel as vulgur scar 9on flesh as it is Gift from nature and natural symptoms... i loveed your rhyms and the way you wove the words in it..i felt pulse of it... tks for haring it....10 read mine mary to marry.... anywhere... she did not come....
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