Christopher's Dead

Isn't This Where We Came In?
Christopher's Dead
Isn't This Where We Came In?
Thursday, November 26, 2009

A Short Story About Killing Myself Comments

Rating: 4.1
Seen the cut surrounded by dry blood. Must have irritated it through the crashing all around me. Wipe it dry, clean, but where’s the fun in that. Avoid exacerbation yet still suffer in excess.

Why not make the pain, the sorrow poor out, hopefully there won’t be anything left inside. Gripping tightly, stab the wound over my heart back open; rip back quickly to greater irritate the skin.

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Christopher's Dead
COMMENTS
Msawenkosi Chamane 02 May 2021
I love it so much and I think am going to perform it next week as a monologue?????
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Amy Marie 27 December 2010
I love poems about this topic. Are you really a survivor of suicidal feelings? That's so cool :) An experience like that is perfect poetry material :)
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Kate Ram 08 April 2010
wow... VERY strong. Great imagery. A little scary how good this is lol. Good writing :)
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Gabriella Mantone 18 March 2010
This is really amazing. Very descriptive and vivid. Thanks for telling me to reead it
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Iron Panda 23™ 01 March 2010
woah! ! ! vivid image....powerful message...AWESOME
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*~*happily desturbed*~* ? 27 February 2010
i know what this feels like, ive went through it... and this is like sum of my poems.
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Karen Hernandez 14 January 2010
this is good exactly how i felt before i got help keep at it
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Christy Rich 23 December 2009
Wow! You did a really great job on this poem. I could picture what you were writing. I think you'll go very far in life :) ....Keep up tha good work!
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Emma Hannon 20 December 2009
your words painted a vivid picture! it was like i was watchin this happen! powerful! did u actually try to kill your self? : O
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Broken Mind 10 December 2009
though the pain of your skin being torn open may help you from hide what your feeling inside, those outside wounds will heal, and you'll delve for more, more pain to mask the pain, and then everyone will see your pain, carved into your skin, your diary etched into your picture till the day you die
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wow this has a good structure and a great message behing it.
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Kristen Burbella 28 November 2009
Death imagery...incredible
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Lady Of The Rose 28 November 2009
its a very good message. some people are just to far gone in there pain they dont think about what there doing and when someone think that death will solve it all its a sad day cause they don't understand that they may end there own pain but there just opening up a new book of pain for those that loved and cared for them they forget the people that stayed by there side when they were down and tried to pick them back up.those people are going to live the rest of there life thinking. why could i stop them? was i not a good enough reason for them to stay? .. its sad and holds the truth but it is also telling someone not to give up and try to keep going that death will not solve your problem and its always be a mistake to give up your life.
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Chitra - 27 November 2009
a different theme...very strong in tone and has a good message embedded in it
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