Samanyan Lakshminarayanan


A Silent Sight - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

a fleet of birds
in the sky
forming an arrow
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  • (3/13/2009 7:11:00 AM)

    A silent sight indeed which we all see and ponder and you have demonstrated the iron birds flight with your intrusive pen......10 for me
    regards uavaniceday
    Ken e
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  • (3/13/2009 6:16:00 AM)

    Silence is golden, like the ink that was used here to write this fine piece (Report)Reply

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  • Ravi A (3/10/2009 11:27:00 AM)

    A very nice idea and well versed also. Enough poetic flow. One is quite natural. The other is man made. This is the difference. We live far away from Nature and this is the trouble. The cave man was quite natural in many ways. We have lost it due to sophistication. Natural flexibility of our senses is gone with the so called civilized ways. We know only the smell of perfume and not the aroma of a nascent born baby. We know only the rock and roll music and not the whispering song of wind.
    Instead of 'the bird', use 'birds'. Best of luck
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  • Ramesh T A (3/10/2009 7:38:00 AM)

    I too have seen such wonder in the sky many times and written poems on white birds doing such a feat! A nice poem to muse over! (Report)Reply

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  • Indira Renganathan (3/10/2009 2:32:00 AM)

    That is the difference between aagatha and anaagatha..i.e nature made and man made...good poem indeed10 (Report)Reply

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  • (3/10/2009 2:28:00 AM)

    A very intelligent thought, birds driven by instincts...man by power and potential....very good interpretation....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/10/2009 1:54:00 AM)

    fine observation......beyond rationale n reasons, beyond philosophies n logics a lot happen in the nature...........cute you related both in uniform..........rgrds/salu (Report)Reply

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  • (3/9/2009 2:11:00 PM)

    A watched a flock of geese and wondered at there symetry (Report)Reply

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  • (3/9/2009 6:36:00 AM)

    We copy from the birds, it is wonderful to watch a flock of birds flying in formation, well written as always,
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • (3/9/2009 3:05:00 AM)

    Men corrupts what nature endow us with..................
    Cutting the branch on which he sits........
    Good Write...........
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  • Fay Slimm (3/9/2009 1:28:00 AM)

    The contrast used in this verse is both moving and thought provoking - - and there is a pulse running all through which provides flow...... an excellent write and a pleasure to read of such perception in poetic word. ....... a 10 from Fay..... with best wishes.... (Report)Reply

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  • (3/8/2009 12:03:00 PM)

    Your piece brings on many thoughts about man and nature. It is clear that
    mankind has learned a lot of lessons from nature. It is as if nature teaches
    man. This is a thought for man to be reminded of from time to time. A very
    important writing.

    GW62
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  • Kesav Easwaran (3/8/2009 10:45:00 AM)

    it seems sky is the limit for your flying thoughts...good piece you have created here...words flying high...soundless...like those birds in your write...10 (Report)Reply

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  • C. P. Sharma (3/8/2009 8:53:00 AM)

    A thought provoking poem. Man has a tendency to immitate Nature and pose his superiority. But during the process delinks from the source resulting into catastrophe.
    CP
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  • (3/8/2009 5:07:00 AM)

    great analogy write of instinct and natural ability into poetical concept..10 (Report)Reply

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