A very nice idea and well versed also. Enough poetic flow. One is quite natural. The other is man made. This is the difference. We live far away from Nature and this is the trouble. The cave man was quite natural in many ways. We have lost it due to sophistication. Natural flexibility of our senses is gone with the so called civilized ways. We know only the smell of perfume and not the aroma of a nascent born baby. We know only the rock and roll music and not the whispering song of wind.
Instead of 'the bird', use 'birds'. Best of luck
fine observation......beyond rationale n reasons, beyond philosophies n logics a lot happen in the nature...........cute you related both in uniform..........rgrds/salu
The contrast used in this verse is both moving and thought provoking - - and there is a pulse running all through which provides flow...... an excellent write and a pleasure to read of such perception in poetic word. ....... a 10 from Fay..... with best wishes....
Your piece brings on many thoughts about man and nature. It is clear that
mankind has learned a lot of lessons from nature. It is as if nature teaches
man. This is a thought for man to be reminded of from time to time. A very
important writing.
GW62
it seems sky is the limit for your flying thoughts...good piece you have created here...words flying high...soundless...like those birds in your write...10
A thought provoking poem. Man has a tendency to immitate Nature and pose his superiority. But during the process delinks from the source resulting into catastrophe.
CP
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