A Smile Poem by Jodilee Duke

A Smile

Rating: 3.0


Purple, green and blue
come on threw
bring along
your friends too,
shower what is true,
create the world
a rainbow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
silver phoenix 31 July 2008

Hey great work, simple but i like it, Please check some of mine too, perhaps youll like it.Rate it and comment if you can, constructive criticism is also welcome, if youre into small poems please read two. If youre more into complex poems check number 2 or 3. Thankyou, Kilian

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Rehab Helmy 31 July 2008

a simple great choice of words keep going on and good luck

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Uriah Hamilton 12 July 2009

a fun sweet poem. A summery read, it seems to me.

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Ron Flowers 21 August 2008

A very nice read. Ron

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Brooke Moran 13 August 2008

lol this is cute. ha ha

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Anthony O. 12 August 2008

a very nice idea! short and sweet but at the same time also powerful.

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rohit sapra 09 August 2008

This poem is really nice as your thoughts about a smile are really very true and smile sometimes can be brighter than a rainbow as its the only thing in this world which is free of cost although holds the value of being the precious if it's understood.

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