Wednesday, September 27, 2017

A Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

Step in rhythm
Stay in eyes
Soft as a smile


Muhammad Ali
Mj Lemon 17 August 2020

A wonderful verse, Ali. AS I read now a second time, I note a hint of melancholy underneath a rhythm and meter that suggest all is upbeat. I suppose therein is the metaphor for life. A great verse, Ali.

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Nosheen Irfan 12 October 2017

What a lovely flow n rhythm. This song goes straight to the heart n makes the heart dance with pure joy. A 10.

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Valsa George 08 October 2017

Chain my thoughts Burn my woes Thoughts come in endless succession enslaving us. When we are asleep, they won't come to nag us. To a state of calm and bliss, let the heart be lifted in sleep! A beautiful prayer!

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Mj Lemon 29 September 2017

A song that resonates. That moon is a perfect final note and a most calming image. Stunning poem, Muhammad.

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Unwritten Soul 27 September 2017

Bring me there too, to the moon of no country that rules just hearts that landed with emotion full....nice song to feel free before sleep :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2017

Near that moon heart beats to hold hand with tenderness and calmness. Chain of thoughts evaporate with thoughts. An amazing prayer poem is shared here.10

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