Tuesday, April 8, 2008

A Subtle Shift Comments

Rating: 5.0
There was a subtle shift today
I felt the axis slip...
Just a notch


Dee Daffodil
Kay Vitter 12 December 2008
This is the kind of subtle shift that often occurs in an unattended relationship. The realization and confusion are skillfully captured.
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Matt Johnston 06 September 2008
Sometimes things change for someone and their not quite able to put their finger on the reason for it. It is a nice idea, illusiveness can be so intriguing. Well done.
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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 April 2008
as the life a journey by the years the boat when rocked up by the age even with jolt even be jilted ocean seems to ahaed but feeling chages yet we are as we were but a shift paradigm inevitabtle by age..................great write, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
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Barry Van Allen 08 April 2008
Dee, I printed out the ' Friendly ' version, - - - hoping it might help, it is tough to read it that way too, - - - we all do what we have to do, - - - I hope someday the subtlety, occurs to me! B.V.A.
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Ernestine Northover 08 April 2008
A subtle poem too Dee. A great read and a great write. Enjoyed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
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Amanda Lukas 08 April 2008
I enjoyed the peaceful acceptance you exhibited throughout. An excellent write.
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Zen Bojczuk 08 April 2008
I can certainly relate...or maybe these are just universal feeling experienced at some time in our lives. The last two lines vividly put the poem into perspective. Nice write. Zen
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Howard Johnson 08 April 2008
I have relished reading the last two lines, most of all.
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Iain Mackay 08 April 2008
What movingly profound sentiments!
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Original Unknown Girl 08 April 2008
Wow Dee! You don't know how much this resonates. I totally get that subtle shift, the way the world just spins slighty out of control, or rather as you put it, just moved slightly on it's axis. Poignant emotions penned sensitively. Love it. Hugs, HG: -) xx
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