A Subtle Shift Comments

This is the kind of subtle shift that often occurs in an unattended relationship. The realization and confusion are skillfully captured.

Sometimes things change for someone and their not quite able to put their finger on the reason for it. It is a nice idea, illusiveness can be so intriguing. Well done.

as the life a journey by the years the boat when rocked up by the age even with jolt even be jilted ocean seems to ahaed but feeling chages yet we are as we were but a shift paradigm inevitabtle by age..................great write, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

Dee, I printed out the ' Friendly ' version, - - - hoping it might help, it is tough to read it that way too, - - - we all do what we have to do, - - - I hope someday the subtlety, occurs to me! B.V.A.

A subtle poem too Dee. A great read and a great write. Enjoyed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

I enjoyed the peaceful acceptance you exhibited throughout. An excellent write.

I can certainly relate...or maybe these are just universal feeling experienced at some time in our lives. The last two lines vividly put the poem into perspective. Nice write. Zen

I have relished reading the last two lines, most of all.

What movingly profound sentiments!

Wow Dee! You don't know how much this resonates. I totally get that subtle shift, the way the world just spins slighty out of control, or rather as you put it, just moved slightly on it's axis. Poignant emotions penned sensitively. Love it. Hugs, HG: -) xx