Wednesday, November 21, 2012

A Touch Of Feelings Comments

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Who is that most merciful
Without weighing and admonishing
My all wickedness and designs of evils
With a whisper of call and eye blinking



Every feeling is very precious if generated from a genuine mind and your attribution of great traits to him/her illustrate the higher strata of your mind. The mighty ocean always reflects the authentic generosity of innumerable rivers carrying plentiful of water to it.. Great write.. consider a little editing where required.

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Unwritten Soul 21 November 2012

The poem you done here has a lot of feeling peaks..different altitudes and valley slope..which make readers travel the words with so good feeling_Soul

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