Seemeen Khan Yousufzai

A Twilight Adieu

Across the lake,
In the sea of sands
A soothing lazy breeze
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Topic(s) of this poem: nature, nature love, romanticism, sky


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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (6/3/2017 6:59:00 AM)

    And the sun winks at the eyes
    Through the clouds
    As a final goodbye for the day
    And the eyes crinkle at the corners
    Lighting up as the sun lights up the sky, beautiful poem and very poetic....... you have the heart of a great poetess and artist... God bless u for this poem.. tony

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    Seemeen Khan Yousufzai SkySeemeen Khan Yousufzai Sky(6/4/2017 4:18:00 AM)

    Thank you very much for such a wonderful comment and taking the time out to read it. Much indebted.

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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (6/2/2017 3:24:00 AM)

    A nice combination of light, colour and passion. Thanks

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    Seemeen Khan Yousufzai SkySeemeen Khan Yousufzai Sky(6/3/2017 2:04:00 AM)

    Thank you.

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