yoonoos peerbocus

Gold Star - 8,697 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

A Water Melon's Truth - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Roving back through wild centuries
At rust and ripeness time
To land blood wet, martyrs fed,
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Comments about A Water Melon's Truth by yoonoos peerbocus

  • (7/25/2017 2:16:00 AM)

    nice poem keep it up wish you good luck, blessings and best wishes. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/23/2017 4:39:00 PM)

    Spectacular work, full of depth and rich imagery, pure perfection of words. (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/7/2016 4:35:00 AM)

    Real beauty of expression.
    Each slice for life time sweet,
    Munch you as you would grapes or kisses.
    Her only hope, wish for nothing on earth
    Save eternal be her internal love's season,
    Akin to sea plain where no autumn comes,
    Though all things go, not one lasts.
    These lines speak volumes for a short yet virtuous life.
    Tanks for this magnificent poem.
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  • Josey Alfred (3/11/2016 5:36:00 AM)

    Her only hope, wish for nothing on earth
    Save eternal be her internal love's season
    Akin to sea plain where no Autumn comes,
    Though all things go, not one lasts.
    Very beautiful write,
    Thanks for sharing.
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  • Adeline Foster (9/16/2015 2:23:00 PM)

    Ah, a tasty poem. like it! Read mine - Brush Strokes -
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  • Captain Cur (6/7/2014 7:00:00 AM)

    A pickadilly of a poem, frumtastical,
    melon masterful, seed fanatical,
    no reason yet it's truth
    and season all surrounds us.
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  • Payal Lalwani (6/7/2013 12:59:00 PM)

    A biography no less with brevity of words.Enjoyed reading.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (6/7/2013 12:16:00 PM)

    a fantastic poem, that deserves all the good reviews (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (6/7/2013 7:33:00 AM)

    love's season, eternal. thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu (6/7/2013 6:04:00 AM)

    A celebration of nature gift! Great write. Thump up for the poet (Report) Reply

  • (6/8/2012 4:21:00 AM)

    wow...such an unusual topic to write a poem on (Report) Reply

  • (6/7/2012 6:16:00 PM)

    The watermelon is filled with nutrients.
    Vitamins, let me mention those heaven sent;
    There are the b vitamins, and of course vitamin c
    But the most important if consumed in excess is vitamin p.

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  • (6/7/2012 2:03:00 PM)

    summer's blood. i can drink this blood. its delicious. (Report) Reply

  • Oludipe Oyin Samuel (6/7/2012 9:53:00 AM)

    We must find inner peace from inner sweetness. That's the trick, the fixed solace factor, even when life's variables drab undyingly. That's the trick. Great majestic poem (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (6/7/2012 8:09:00 AM)

    Off the truck expression! Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (6/7/2012 7:35:00 AM)

    Everything good and bad bears seeds.
    Enlightening poem.
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  • (6/7/2012 2:40:00 AM)

    water melon has one thing to offer
    its sweetness,
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  • Malaya Roses (8/28/2010 7:57:00 AM)

    every slice shall lead a taste bud to the truth of taste. Seasons, centuries or civilization will change but the we are looking for the same taste. But sometimes in searching for the aim, we forgot how to be not selfish.
    i like this poem and it is good.
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  • (8/2/2010 10:19:00 PM)

    So profound when reading '......bear peace= a sweet heart, summer blood....' (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2010 12:53:00 PM)

    Descriptive and meaningful! Good poem indeed, ; D (Report) Reply

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