Thursday, November 6, 2008

A Wild Exotic Comments

Rating: 4.3
Where does my mind start? Where does my mind end? No
expanse to the ultimate, the thoughts do not stop. Time does
not stop. It is all in perpetual motion. All a vibration in the
universe. Constant it is, alive in the conception. I am me,


Meggie Gultiano 09 July 2010
simply beautiful...
0 0 Reply
Macrocosm and Microcosm in relation…meditative stuff … Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
0 0 Reply
Raj Arumugam 17 February 2010
an interesting meditation on the expansiveness of the mind
0 0 Reply
Abby Keen/harris 11 February 2010
wonderful! ! ! im not religous but i liked this poem.
0 0 Reply
Sylvi Sylva 25 January 2010
a wonderful expression of sense of being...almost an identity, another brilliant read. a ten plus!
0 0 Reply
Sally Plumb Plumb 12 December 2009
If you'd like to read the flip side of your poem... try 'Crucible'.Regards Sally
0 0 Reply
Moonbee Canady 19 November 2009
A Truly Deep Thought Poem... Gives The Reader, Something To Think About... You Expressed Eternity, Beautifully in the Symbolism of a Song... A Very Enjoyable Read... MoonBee
0 0 Reply
Ezna Stephna 13 November 2009
really wonderful poem, nicely expressed.......thanks for sharing 10++
0 0 Reply
Costa Anakiev 31 October 2009
I love the ideas you put in. Konstantin.
0 0 Reply
Rachel Butler 10 October 2009
Yet, I am a part of this vibration, a cord or note, in the music of the universe. Rachel Ann Butler
0 0 Reply
Indira Babbellapati 03 October 2009
as exotic as the oceans as exotic as the dense wilderness as exotic as an infant's smile as exotic as a mother's warmth who knows where it starts who will ever know where it ends...
0 0 Reply
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 23 September 2009
0 0 Reply
Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009
Wonderfully crafted. Keep writing!
0 0 Reply
Ken E Hall 04 September 2009
The wonder of it all the science of it all God's creation all in your poem of thought -a wild exotic it surely is ++++++10 regards
0 0 Reply
Where does my mind start? Where does my mind end? No expanse to the ultimate, the thoughts do not s......... ........................ ........................ lovely and neautiful presentation.. mind is workshop of thoughts.....nice one read mine thouhgts...inflamed mind.. sun eclispe..
0 0 Reply
Indira Renganathan 04 July 2009
About beginning and end in a pensive mood of time....philosophical poem
0 0 Reply
Sarwar Chowdhury 02 July 2009
philosophical quests penned beautifully! its an informative poem, 10+
0 0 Reply
Saadat Tahir 20 June 2009
very nice poem... gazing at an unreachable distant sky.... contemplation.....but answers...who knows who can say great cheers
0 0 Reply
Ritty Patnaik 09 June 2009
dear joe, is the timelessness of time that intrigues us.where does it begin and end, only time can tell.this poem is written, in sensitivity of mature understanding of the importance of time in all our lives. 10++
0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 03 June 2009
good poem Joe...yes; mind is wild...and exotic too...thanks for your wisdom write...10
0 0 Reply

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

2/27/2021 4:45:07 AM #