joe foster
memphis, tennesee
Monday, May 7, 2012
A Womans Happiness Comments
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Such sexy wishes a women can have
she takes your mood with her, as you follow behind,
such a beautiful feeling,
a feeling inside.
she takes your mood with her, as you follow behind,
such a beautiful feeling,
a feeling inside.
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joe foster
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Ally Gunther
10 May 2012
I've read a few of your poems- I think they're really good, something you may want to work on is a more abstract way to show these feelings- metaphors etc...dw I need to work on it too :)
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