louis rams

Gold Star - 11,691 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

*******************a Womans Insight*************1978 - Poem by louis rams

i felt a slight twinge in my heart
that deep down burning feeling tearing me apart.
i thought that it would go away
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Comments about *******************a Womans Insight*************1978 by louis rams

  • Jez Brul (5/7/2018 9:10:00 PM)

    Such an insightful write...I enjoyed reading...two thumbs up and 10+++++++++ (Report)Reply

    (5/8/2018 7:31:00 PM)

    thank you for coming to my page and for your beautiful comment

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  • Melvina Germain (8/7/2015 11:24:00 PM)

    We do have this beautiful Blessing and all we have to do is pa; y attention and listen to our inner voice. God is so good, all the time. Thank you Louis for your precious poems..... (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins (5/30/2013 4:08:00 PM)

    the female has an insight no other can match. Given to her by GOD to protet her children. lovely write (Report)Reply

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  • Adeline Foster (2/13/2012 3:14:00 PM)

    Interesting, it is not easy to look beneath the actions of others and see the life behind the desires and loses. Read mine Cicatrix -
    Adeline
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  • (7/1/2010 1:13:00 PM)

    A rich matriarch type poem. A womans love was truly captured in your write! ; D (Report)Reply

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  • (12/29/2009 8:36:00 PM)

    beautifully handed down the line...the wealth of love (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/3/2009 8:54:00 PM)

    now when she looks into her little childs eyes
    she'll get that same feeling by and by.
    and she'll know it was passed down the line.

    it is greatness of woman to have insight for emerging woman in child.. same struggle and smae passing of stage with so much care and worry.. i lovley presentation sir. i am fo rit...10

    read mine papa do u know..papa u too...mom i miis u
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  • (8/31/2009 9:47:00 PM)

    Oh, Louis, that is a very wonderful message to your daughter! I am touched for that fatherly love... Not all fathers in the planet are like you! I appreciate your lines, let it be seen by the world so that love can touch souls! It can be applied not nly to daughters, but to all children of all genders and parents too! i rate you 10! EXCELLENT! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/31/2009 10:42:00 AM)

    Beautiful and creatively penned. Lovely. (Report)Reply

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