Mohammad Akmal Nazir
Bahraich, U.P. India
Friday, November 26, 2010

Abortion Comments

Rating: 4.5
The blow was very cruel,
The bud could not blossom,
It died underneath,
And who cares?


Mohammad Akmal Nazir
Sally Plumb Plumb 20 September 2017
Over excited you say.Would have been a good flower.
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Very Philosophical poem. All is accidental and based on probable situations I guess!
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Alex Walker 17 November 2012
This poem really packs a punch. It may be small, but it has so much to read into. I enjoy it.
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Marissa Rodgers 24 September 2012
This poem is very well written and to the point. After reading a second time I read even more into it. Very nice! May God be with and protect all the unborn babies!
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 16 November 2011
simple and well written, , outstanding..i give you 10++ here Akmal.
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Esther Ayala 25 July 2011
I love reading your Poems, though it seems more like Poetry, beautiful! I only wish I could write more poetry. I'm just not good at reading the meanings behind it, I have difficulty in understanding, it takes great talent to do something like that. Please read and rate my poem on an Unborn Child, it is also on abortion.
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Lariel Morihsta 22 July 2011
i see what you are trying to say in this poem, truthfully it is a good poem, but by playing with the words, you can make it more stronger. Keep it up
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Mark Louie Cañete 12 July 2011
very realistict it mirrors what is happening in the present! keep it up!
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Siyabonga Sikhakhane 12 July 2011
Simple and intense I like it
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Its succinctness felt like a very sharp knife suddenly ending a very fragile life and left me momentarily stunned: therefore it has done its job extremely well. I don't like to rate works of art - that's Simon Cowell territory: -)
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Eman Awad 10 July 2011
so simple and really well written, amazing, it describes abortion perfectly well done, rated 10 ofcourse...
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Trinny Ruizi 09 July 2011
So true! I liked it, it is good
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Khembottra Oum 08 July 2011
Really good poem. Not the kinda topic I usually read but good nonetheless.
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Akshita Yadav 08 July 2011
well written, precise in emotion as well as description
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David Taylor 07 July 2011
nice, thanx for reading, commenting and rating mine too :)
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Adisty Mulianty 06 July 2011
wow, , , in just simple words u describe the emotion inside... wonderful piece.. rate it 10 - very nice indeed....
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Alfonso Siverls 06 July 2011
Very good, i could feel the strong emotions in the poem. I rate it 10
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Antonio Liao 05 July 2011
It’s a renaissance of birth of Life....a victory in the making....a concept crafted to preserve mankind....hope and pray that all must read this kind of Lines...God bless and a 10 +++++
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Micmac Mccrory 05 July 2011
A very good description of abortion. This would make a perfect description in a dictionary for abortion.
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Kaycie Cooper 05 July 2011
It was short and too the point, but yet, there's so much said in between those lines. A well written message, a 10 in my book. Bravo.
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