Abortion Comments

Over excited you say.Would have been a good flower.

Very Philosophical poem. All is accidental and based on probable situations I guess!

This poem really packs a punch. It may be small, but it has so much to read into. I enjoy it.

This poem is very well written and to the point. After reading a second time I read even more into it. Very nice! May God be with and protect all the unborn babies!

simple and well written, , outstanding..i give you 10++ here Akmal.

I love reading your Poems, though it seems more like Poetry, beautiful! I only wish I could write more poetry. I'm just not good at reading the meanings behind it, I have difficulty in understanding, it takes great talent to do something like that. Please read and rate my poem on an Unborn Child, it is also on abortion.

i see what you are trying to say in this poem, truthfully it is a good poem, but by playing with the words, you can make it more stronger. Keep it up

very realistict it mirrors what is happening in the present! keep it up!

Simple and intense I like it

Its succinctness felt like a very sharp knife suddenly ending a very fragile life and left me momentarily stunned: therefore it has done its job extremely well. I don't like to rate works of art - that's Simon Cowell territory: -)

so simple and really well written, amazing, it describes abortion perfectly well done, rated 10 ofcourse...

So true! I liked it, it is good

Really good poem. Not the kinda topic I usually read but good nonetheless.

well written, precise in emotion as well as description

nice, thanx for reading, commenting and rating mine too :)

wow, , , in just simple words u describe the emotion inside... wonderful piece.. rate it 10 - very nice indeed....

Very good, i could feel the strong emotions in the poem. I rate it 10

It’s a renaissance of birth of Life....a victory in the making....a concept crafted to preserve mankind....hope and pray that all must read this kind of Lines...God bless and a 10 +++++

A very good description of abortion. This would make a perfect description in a dictionary for abortion.

It was short and too the point, but yet, there's so much said in between those lines. A well written message, a 10 in my book. Bravo.