Friday, January 3, 2003

Admonitions Comments

Rating: 3.4

i don't promise you nothing
but this
what you pawn


Lucille Clifton
Ravi Kopra 02 December 2017

Boys, be straight turn off the TV don't sit giggling foolishly listen to your big mama go do your homework or i will whip your black ass and you will plead and cry - mama, please, no mama...

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 December 2017

With a nice style the poet has put his point hard. Humorous.Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2017

Beautiful poem with humor huntingly depicted. Thanks and congratulations for POD.

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Rajnish Manga 02 December 2017

Nicely put forth. A sensible way to correct a wrong perception. Thanks, Lucille.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 02 December 2017

I feel it was so thoughtful and humor of her to give children this admonition........very well crafted.......thanks for sharing

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 December 2017

With a great sense of humour to live by, your poem touches the core silently and smoothly. Thanks for the poem so brilliant. 10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 December 2017

I like the sense of humor of Lucille Clifton??????

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 December 2017

She is a poet! Thanks for sharing.

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Geoffrey Fafard 02 December 2017

Don't you just love the last few lines...I do!

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Dutendra Chamling 28 October 2015

...boys i don't promise you nothing but this what you pawn i will redeem what you steal i will conceal my private silence to your public guilt is all i got... What a wonderful.

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Colleen Courtney 15 May 2014

Love this quirky and humorous poem! Well done!

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Richard Hexem 29 March 2010

I like this. good write.

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