Adorable Chocolate... Poem by hazem al jaber

Adorable Chocolate...

Rating: 3.0


Adorable chocolate...



melt me...

melt me as a sweet candy...

sweet chocolate...

that chocolate which you adore...

chocolate that you never be shared with anyone..

only you and your lips...

melt me...

taste me as your adorable chocolate...

start from the first of your lips...

till you get me there..

there between your tongue and throat..

keep me there to stay..

stay giving you a sweet nectar from me...

there keep sucking me as that chocolate which you adore...

keep do...

don`t stop...

till you get the last sweetest dropp of me...

melt me...

be drunk of the chocolate which i am giving you now...

are you drunk now..? ? ...



by: hazem02@yahoo.com

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 14 May 2009

What a seductive treat! For anyone who enjoys chocolate in all its many varieties. Nice.

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Joseph Poewhit 14 May 2009

Chocolate came from some vendor

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

What a nice poem: 'melt me as a sweet candy... sweet chocolate...' 10++

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DaNa XxX 16 May 2009

mmmmm very delicious and sweet poem....Certainly 10 from me! ! !

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poppl 09 November 2017

pooooooooooooooooooooooo

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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2015

The sweet, delicious and succulent taste of chocolate well depicted in the poem. No wonder many people crave for it. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Char Pattrick 26 September 2009

Nicely written, makes me think of fondue.

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Ewa Espling 05 September 2009

.. I feel the beutiful tase of a pice of chocolate om my lips when i read your poem ... so beutiful written on a subject so close to my heart as chocolate...... tanks a lot sincerly Ewa

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Bright Rose 19 May 2009

that was TASTY, brilliant idea, so creative keep it up :)

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