Eyan Desir

Rookie - 63 Points (caribbean)

... Adultery...A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins - Poem by Eyan Desir

In the circle of love
Wrapped with loyal bonds
Clever demons play their songs
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Comments about ... Adultery...A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins by Eyan Desir

  • (9/26/2009 12:35:00 AM)

    yah, that was straight to the point! ...i dig your direction and intention...you're pretty dang good with words! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/25/2009 8:06:00 AM)

    I love it. great read! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/17/2009 2:08:00 PM)

    I LOVE IT EYAN! I FELT THAT =D (Report)Reply

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  • (9/16/2009 7:57:00 PM)

    absolutely loved it..short yet it sent shivers down my spine..if you read any of my poems, i have adultery down to a tee.10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/31/2009 1:31:00 PM)

    its really good but all girls open ther legs..lol but great poem (Report)Reply

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  • (8/27/2009 6:42:00 PM)

    great poem it is very desribable in all ways
    great job again and very creative
    keep up the good work
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  • (8/27/2009 5:43:00 AM)

    excellent lyric metaphor:
    ''The tunes of love and lust
    Creeps within their core
    Silencing all their morals
    Rendering these mortals
    To their emotions''
    and excellent poem, thank you for sharing.................10+++++
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  • Miriam Maia Padua (8/27/2009 12:43:00 AM)

    eye opener..
    temptations are just nearby....
    sweet and appealing....
    10

    Maia
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  • (8/26/2009 6:54:00 PM)

    Hey man..
    how are you? ?
    after a long time turn to your page.. after S.L and Windies ate a kangaroo curry! ! ! ! ! .....

    hey very good write.. very creative and nice to read.., , very interesting title..
    poem didn't disappoint either, .. very good..! ! ! 10..

    cheers// best wishes
    Shan
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  • (8/26/2009 9:02:00 AM)

    Initial liners were really good.Well Expressed. (Report)Reply

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